Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Looks like a beautiful cup and saucer from your son, Patty and you have the cup and saucer pattern just right through your words as she waits, while the tea is brewing.
nice one,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi valda; thank you for this lovely review for my teacup poem about a teacup. This was a fun write and a loving tribute to my beautiful antique cup and saucer,
~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written teacup poem. Although there is nothing really wrong with your poem. I was told once when I was doing this kind of poetry that the title should be part of the poem.

Suggestion:

TEACUP 'N SAUCER
She sits so pretty
on her saucer
nice and neat
She waits
Tea
filled to china brim

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Good morning, Sandra; I didn't know that. I will add it to my notes. Thank you for stopping by to read and review,
~patty~

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

I like the half etheree in the shape of a cup on a saucer personifying the teacup. It is waiting for what fills its life.

I like the fancy empty cup of the artwork.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi dragonpoet; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~

reply by dragonpoet on 21-Apr-2017

You're welcome. I did.

Joan

Comment from Rubylou

Excellent

Hi Patty,
I love this teacup poem about a teacup. I enjoyed how you made the cup come to life through personification. The anticipation can be felt while waiting to be filled much like when we ourselves wait.
Nicely done,
Rubylou

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Good morning; I appreciate your kind words about this little poem about my teacup. Thank you for stopping by,
~patty~

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

It is a very pretty poem ,so ideally and aptly described.'tea filled to china brim' is an interesting line.
Like the cup it is neat and pretty .
congratulations and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi; thank you so much for your review of this piece. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from mbroyles2

Excellent

Very nice imagery of a patient tea cup awaiting the fulfillment of life.
Very crisp words.
We should all be so lucky as to be filled to the China brim.
Excellent writing!
Michael

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi Michael; thank you so much for your lovely review of my teacup poem. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Amazing detail in the tea cup Patty. A tea cup so proud serving many a Devon-shire tea party. You words personify this tea cup perfectly. Thanks for sharing.

dip

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

Hi dip; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Patty,
This is beautiful. Good job on the syllable counts per line. Your words form a perfect teacup.

Your picture is awesome, too.

Together words & picture make an awesome poem.

Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review this whimsical piece about a teacup. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~

Comment from ameen786

Exceptional

This one is a beauty! I enjoyed your Teacup poem and learned about the form/style as well; you inspired me to try this style; thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review this whimsical piece about a teacup. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~
the six stars are lovely!

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Some prefer to play with their poems, such as this one which is called a structure poem. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017

thank you for stopping by to read and review this whimsical piece about a teacup. I'm glad you enjoyed it,
~patty~