Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Spider and the Fly"Dawn of Chaos
26 total reviews
Comment from 24chas
This was a good read, TPAC. The whole flow and especially the imagery were well done. I've got to admit the ending made me a little squeamish. Great choice of words for that. Nice job.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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This was a good read, TPAC. The whole flow and especially the imagery were well done. I've got to admit the ending made me a little squeamish. Great choice of words for that. Nice job.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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I'm working on my writes, thanking reviewers for aiding my learning process. Appreciate your thpughts and generous rate.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
There is no secrets but the truth, the power and will force to work on, and by heart the song to sing and get ahead; none can hold you back; endurance work; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring. Happy New Year! -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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There is no secrets but the truth, the power and will force to work on, and by heart the song to sing and get ahead; none can hold you back; endurance work; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring. Happy New Year! -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Glad again some aspects in my writes were found appealing, thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from Miss Sherry
This a ride on a cosmic rainbow....is representative of many who feel they are invulnerable. Beautiful artwork, could be compared to beautiful people we choose who devour our essence without compunction. Food for thought.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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This a ride on a cosmic rainbow....is representative of many who feel they are invulnerable. Beautiful artwork, could be compared to beautiful people we choose who devour our essence without compunction. Food for thought.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Don't have to think, being fully aware of such events, denying any judgements by me of mine or others choses. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from jmshumate
This was an interesting and original poem to read. Some times show offs end caught up in a web and soon dead. The spider was very patient and patience usually comes out the victor. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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This was an interesting and original poem to read. Some times show offs end caught up in a web and soon dead. The spider was very patient and patience usually comes out the victor. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Glad aspects of this write were found appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from sheena121
A very good story of entrapment. Well written and good use of grammar and punctuation, spelling and language all well done and a perfect picture to set it all off and make it all the more interesting.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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A very good story of entrapment. Well written and good use of grammar and punctuation, spelling and language all well done and a perfect picture to set it all off and make it all the more interesting.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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I wish half of those things you stated were true, past rates two stars with remarks defining the opposite of your given comments. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Suddenly a heard ting the fly stopped short, trapped in a spot him loud sing out, a gasp had by clap and bang -then crunch.
And I thought this was going to be a love poem.
Excellent writing.
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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Suddenly a heard ting the fly stopped short, trapped in a spot him loud sing out, a gasp had by clap and bang -then crunch.
And I thought this was going to be a love poem.
Excellent writing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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That's a thought. My writes suffers pits so revision are needed, still I'm glad certain aspects dispute were found to be pleasing to read. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed remarks.
