Soft Paradise
A blind man's second chance at sight.44 total reviews
Comment from Caressa_08
Besides being a skilled photographer, she seems to also know quite a bit how to write poetry and need to take a look at her web-site to see more of her work and Thanks for letting us know about Audrey and her website...C.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Besides being a skilled photographer, she seems to also know quite a bit how to write poetry and need to take a look at her web-site to see more of her work and Thanks for letting us know about Audrey and her website...C.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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HI Caressa, she truly is a very talented young lady...you really should go to her web site...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...and I always love seeing you...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Linda,
how nice of you to post your friend's daughter poem. I hope she appreciate your kind act.
Linda what I want to read and review are your postings
so tell me which ones shall I read.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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Hello Linda,
how nice of you to post your friend's daughter poem. I hope she appreciate your kind act.
Linda what I want to read and review are your postings
so tell me which ones shall I read.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017
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HI Gert, just read which ones you would like to...that would be wonderful...I have been busy with my house lately...but I am almost done...hope to get back writing again...Audrey loved reading the reviews...thank you so very much sweet lady...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Anio
This is truly a soul touching poem. This person walks gently on Mother Earth and drinks in so gladly of Her Bounty. Blindness is also one of Depression's nasty little gifts, and this EXACTLY, is what it's like when sight is given back and the Black Dog slinks away. Such deep insight and such a gift to write like this. The photo! Are they my tears on the lens or some one else's or just the rain. I shall take note of the link.
Thank you, Linda, love xxoo Anita
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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This is truly a soul touching poem. This person walks gently on Mother Earth and drinks in so gladly of Her Bounty. Blindness is also one of Depression's nasty little gifts, and this EXACTLY, is what it's like when sight is given back and the Black Dog slinks away. Such deep insight and such a gift to write like this. The photo! Are they my tears on the lens or some one else's or just the rain. I shall take note of the link.
Thank you, Linda, love xxoo Anita
Comment Written 15-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2017
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Hi Anita, this one was written by my girlfriends daughter...she is so talented...I posted it for her...she will be so happy to read your review...thank you my sweet friend...God Bless...Linda xxoo
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Wow Linda, you certainly pack a big punch with this beauty! I love the flow and your words made me FEEL the gentle rain and how cool it must feel on the face. I see you haven't lost your "touch". lol Great work. Nice to see you again. xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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Wow Linda, you certainly pack a big punch with this beauty! I love the flow and your words made me FEEL the gentle rain and how cool it must feel on the face. I see you haven't lost your "touch". lol Great work. Nice to see you again. xoxo deborah
Comment Written 13-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2017
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HI Deborah, my girlfriends daughter wrote this one...I told her I would post it for her...she is such a talent...thank you for a wonderful review...I know she will love it...and it is soooo good to see you as well...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from estory
This poem, with its repeating images, its repeating sounds of 'light' 'night' and 'sight', in this flat kind of monotone, was kind of surreal feeling. We have the blind man that can see the mist of the rain, rolling the dice, sitting in this soft, misty landscape. it is all ethereal and dream like, and we don't seem to have come from anywhere, or are going anywhere. We are endlessly rolling the dice, watching the mist, waiting out the night. estory
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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This poem, with its repeating images, its repeating sounds of 'light' 'night' and 'sight', in this flat kind of monotone, was kind of surreal feeling. We have the blind man that can see the mist of the rain, rolling the dice, sitting in this soft, misty landscape. it is all ethereal and dream like, and we don't seem to have come from anywhere, or are going anywhere. We are endlessly rolling the dice, watching the mist, waiting out the night. estory
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Hi story, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad that you like it...and you are so right...my girlfriends daughter wrote the poem...and took the picture...thank you...love Audrey...xxoo Linda
Comment from Neonewman
Beautifully crafted piece you have delivered here my friend, love the photo your friend provided. "Soft paradise" What a brilliant description this is, I felt goosebumps.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Beautifully crafted piece you have delivered here my friend, love the photo your friend provided. "Soft paradise" What a brilliant description this is, I felt goosebumps.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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HI Steve, thank you my friend for a great review...I am so glad you like it...Audrey also wrote the poem...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
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My pleasure Linda!
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smiling...xxoo
Comment from Rasmine
This is a very neat poem.
I am a bit confused by your author's notes--did Audrey Folk write this or you? There may be a typo or maybe not. But I really like the poem. It's about hope. :)
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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This is a very neat poem.
I am a bit confused by your author's notes--did Audrey Folk write this or you? There may be a typo or maybe not. But I really like the poem. It's about hope. :)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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HI Rasmine, my girlfriends daughter wrote it...Audrey...and she took the picture...thank you for a great review...love Audrey...xxoo Linda
Comment from kahpot
Excellent great words and rhyme and easy flow for the reader, and rain can be peaceable or devastating a wonderful read thank you for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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Excellent great words and rhyme and easy flow for the reader, and rain can be peaceable or devastating a wonderful read thank you for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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HI Kahpot, thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome my friend...love Audrey...xxoo Linda
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Soft Paradise" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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"Soft Paradise" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
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HI Duchess, thank you my sweet friend for a great review...I am so glad you like it....love Linda xxoo and Audrey...my girlfriends daughter who wrote this...take care sweet lady...
linda, it's always great to read and review your work.
luff to you and Audrey,
the Duchess xx000
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smiling big...xxoo love
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linda, smiling big too.....
luff, the duchess xxoo
Comment from Hitcher
a thought provoking poem your girlfriend's daughter has penned her friend, clever use of rhyme and strong visuals to play in the minds eye. I thinking but am not sure he does indeed get a second chance at seeing again, I hope so, who doesn't like a happy ending : )
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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a thought provoking poem your girlfriend's daughter has penned her friend, clever use of rhyme and strong visuals to play in the minds eye. I thinking but am not sure he does indeed get a second chance at seeing again, I hope so, who doesn't like a happy ending : )
Comment Written 20-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2017
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HI Hitcher, I love a happy ending...thank you so much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...smiling back at you...love Audrey...xxoo Linda
