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My Autobiography

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Comment from mermaids
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I commend you on your sobriety and the growth you have accomplished as a person. You are finding out who you are without substances. I enjoyed reading your journey and many can relate to your words. God is so good and faith in Him reflects how healthy you have become.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
    Thank-you. You are the first to know, this individual has apologized to me, and my prayers have been answered.
    Darren~
Comment from Cranial Thinker
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I can relate to this post as I have had a gang after me for more then six years now and the police and even my neighbors don't want to help me and The Lord is all I have depending on not being able to see Him working is something else our minds loving progress reports because we think in limited dimensions composed of infinite time because of the awareness of our true likeness if we should openly accept it, but along with it you must cerebrally acknowledge that listening is your forever strong point because that ensures lowness of physical actions then comes that no matter what because there is simply no other place we can ever go and find honesty, loves divineness and authentic open arm's of solid reassuring grow-able love and success in meeting peace everywhere your feet are forever guided to be remembering the eyes of love saw us, loved us, and received us before we where ever born....This is so well written it being divinely transparent....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2017
    I knew we had a connection, I was just not aware of the depth. I wrote this for many reasons, but now I realize that it is really dedicated to you, my fine struggling, gifted friend.
    In His Name,
    Darren ~
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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'My Tumultuous Life' is a good read.
Nicely written.
--I look forward to reading more.
The author's notes are greatly appreciated.- Thank you!
Great artwork: The image shown fits this story perfectly.
Thanks for sharing a part of your book.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 20-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
    Thank - you for reading and reviewing. With each of the specific wonderful warm reviews, I gain a better perspective, and ore strength in knowing that I am doing the right thing! Thanks so much, really appreciate your kind comments and continued support.
    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
Comment from robyn corum
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Darren,

I like the image of you being stressed and frustrated, but allowing the peace of God to flow over you -- instead of taking up the fists, you take up a pen and piece of paper to record your thoughts and count your blessings. Wonderful job -- it shows your progress. Good luck, my friend!

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 20-Apr-2017
    Thank - you for reading and reviewing. With each of the specific wonderful warm reviews, I gain a better perspective, and ore strength in knowing that I am doing the right thing! Thanks so much, really appreciate your kind comments and continued support.
    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Hello my friend you should be so proud of yourself to have turned your life around and being to help so many others in the process I enjoyed your writing well done God bless you for what you do regards Jill

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the warm review, I especially like it when you put your personal perspective; describing what elements are most appealing.

    These reviews are special, healing, and very personally valuable. I can not begin to convey how connected to this dynamic spark of creative positivity we are.

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Badger,

All of the things you've written were very interesting to read. Still, it took awhile to read everything. I'd much rather have something that didn't take such a long time to read, but that's just me.

Kat

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the warm review, I especially like it when you put your personal perspective; describing what elements are most appealing.

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
reply by MizKat on 19-Apr-2017
    You're very welcome. I like reading your work. Kat
Comment from Quantum Traveler
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Well Darren..."Badger 29" I have enjoyed Hip Hopping and Rapping through some of your writings and have wondered at times where the depth of the Writings come from and now I know and can relate to the Messages that Poured Out from Between the Lines of your Writings.

You are quite an Exceptional Individual to Withstand the Trials of One's Journey in Life and I can See and Feel the Warmth of Your Heart and Soul that Simmers from within Your Envelope as they Ease their way into your Writings.

I Congratulate You on your Progress toward Life Elevated and the Intermingling of Scriptures that help us to be Lifted and Comforted in Times of Need.

Stay the Course Darren...We are Here to Experience Life so that We May Teach of these Encounters to an Existence Beyond the Veil.

I am indeed Proud of Your Accomplishments for they are of a Just Cause.
You are Definitely a Six for Me...Quantum Traveler...Phil.

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the warm review, I especially like it when you put your personal perspective; describing what elements are most appealing.

    These reviews are special, healing, and very personally valuable. I can not begin to convey how connected to this dynamic spark of creative positivity we are.

    Blessings,
    Brother Badger
reply by Quantum Traveler on 18-Apr-2017
    I am Blessed that You have been a Part of My Life's Journey.
    Blessings to You Brother Badger...Q.T.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
    You have Philled my day with Phillosophy.

    Thanks,

    Darren. ? : - D >~
reply by Quantum Traveler on 18-Apr-2017
    Funny...Darren
Comment from apky
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Thank you so much for sharing this, Darren. I feel I know you better and I also feel proud that you've come such a long way, my friend.
You're strong enough to keep it up, I'm confident.
Minor corrections: Do you mean Del Paso Heights or is it Heghts?

>>so I sked him again<< "asked" him again.
Bless,
Apky

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the compassionate review, and help w spelling. I really appreciate this feedback right before I go home, you do not realize how much this helps; you are doing the work of God~
    Blessings,
    Darren~
Comment from lyenochka
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Praising God and thanking Him with you for all the victories He gave you in all these difficulties. You are truly blessed!
Below are some spelling errors that I found.
"Heghts" (Heights?)
"carreer" (career)
"Teusday " (Tuesday)
"inbalanced " (unbalanced?)
"sked" (asked)
"astma" (asthma)

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the compassionate review, and help w spelling. I really appreciate this feedback right before I go home, you do not realize how much this helps; you are doing the work of God~
    Blessings,
    Darren~
Comment from MissMerri
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This is such an interesting chapter in your autobiography. It needs a little editing... when you are not tired, preferably. But the story is wonderful. It tells of a strong, growing, learning young man who is walking on the right path and becoming the best he can be with God's unfaltering assistance. I loved the way you described your life. It is so easy to see what you are talking about. You have great descriptive skills. I will talk about the editing tomorrow. It is late tonight. Hugs, MM

 Comment Written 18-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
    Thanks for the compassionate review, and help w spelling. I really appreciate this feedback right before I go home, you do not realize how much this helps; you are doing the work of God~
    Blessings,
    Darren~