Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine haiku for the contest
with excellent imagery in the garden/weed
and solid grammatical connection
A good satori line, but it seems dependent upon the picture
for the jigsaw piece
Still, a fine haiku and picture match
Best wishes in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks for the critique zanya

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork.
-Syllable count is good.
-Good concrete imagery
and description of the "vile weed."
-Interesting satori that ties in with the picture.
-Thanks for sharing, Zanya.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks for the critique zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Apr-2017

You are welcome, Zanya.

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Yes, weeds are an ecological jigsaw piece. I suppose a weed is a plant for which humans have not found a use for yet. You portray the weed as a fiendish garden activist. A dandelion is their Molotov cocktail. You make effective use of metaphor and personification. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2017

Thanks for reading and engaging -great review zanya