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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Crown of Thorns"
a collection of my poetry

66 total reviews 
Comment from jusylee72
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The crown as a cruel joke, what kind of cruelty existed before Christ. He brought to the earth the idea that you look out for each other and are not selfish. What a wonderful teacher he must have been.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review my poem for Him. I appreciate your comments and words of encouragement,
    ~patty~
Comment from patcelaw
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Patty, what a powerful write for this Good Friday. He took the thorns and the nails for all who will come to Him for eternal salvation. Blessings for a wonderful Easter weekend. He is Risen., Patricia

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
    He is risen Indeed!
    Thank you for your kind review,
    May you and yours have a blessed Easter,
    ~patty~
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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An excellent reminder of a sad event. Jesus suffered for our sins. Forget Easter bunnies and eggs. Spend time to reflect on the true meaning of Easter.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
    thank you so much for your Exceptional rating. I am spending today focusing on Him and His sacrifice. I appreciate your time, kind words, and encouragement,
    ~patty~😀

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Patty this is a fantastic Cinquain of the crown of Christ, well done my friend.
Have a wonderful weekend. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Kerry~~~~~~~~~~~~

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
    Hi Kerry;
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Its only through Him and His grace that I'm here,
    ~patty~
    May you and yours have a blessed Easter
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 15-Apr-2017
    Your welcome
Comment from Bill O'Bier
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Easter is meant to be a symbol of hope, renewal, and new life.God proved His love on the Cross. When Christ hung, and bled, and died, it was God saying to the
world- I love you. Thanks for your lovely cinquain Easter tribute.
Bill~

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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Its only through Him and His grace that I'm here,
    ~patty~
Comment from Oatmeal
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PATTY,

The arrangement is formatted very well. Chosen explanations are made very clear and descriptive. Flowing very nicely. Emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. It was a pleasure to read.

I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

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 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
    Hi Camille!
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Its only through Him and His grace that I'm here,
    ~patty~
    May you and yours have a blessed Easter