My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Crown of Thorns"a collection of my poetry
66 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Perfect! This is the weekend that Jesus gave up His life to save all ours. What a terrible way to die though. Now, with the world in the state it's in, we need to remember what He gave up for us more than ever. Superb, my friend, an excellent cinquain for Easter. Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
Perfect! This is the weekend that Jesus gave up His life to save all ours. What a terrible way to die though. Now, with the world in the state it's in, we need to remember what He gave up for us more than ever. Superb, my friend, an excellent cinquain for Easter. Sandra xxx
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement,
~patty~😀
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
He gives us always fathomless love and strength for tomorrow is always happy in his glorifying name. The fallen shall always rise.
A wonderful poem, so hope giving.
Have a nice day.
Namaskaram
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
He gives us always fathomless love and strength for tomorrow is always happy in his glorifying name. The fallen shall always rise.
A wonderful poem, so hope giving.
Have a nice day.
Namaskaram
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement,
~patty~😀
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Oh, I absolutely agree, Patty. I love this form as well but rarely have I seen one written as superbly. Congratulations my friend, this is exquisite, Giddy
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
Oh, I absolutely agree, Patty. I love this form as well but rarely have I seen one written as superbly. Congratulations my friend, this is exquisite, Giddy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Hi Giddy,
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.
Your six star rating means the world to me,
Hope you have a great day,
~patty~😀
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your cinquain "Crown of Thorns" All your lines and syllables were correct, and you chose a lovely photo.
Best of luck
Happy Easter.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
I enjoyed reading your cinquain "Crown of Thorns" All your lines and syllables were correct, and you chose a lovely photo.
Best of luck
Happy Easter.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement,
~patty~😀
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Mustangpatty1020, A spiritual poem in simply stated words to commemorate this Holy date. Of special note:
The crown
meant as a joke
pressed on your Holy head
(Very sad, but true - vivid, painful imagery)
Good Cinquain formate. Excellent complementary artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
Hello Mustangpatty1020, A spiritual poem in simply stated words to commemorate this Holy date. Of special note:
The crown
meant as a joke
pressed on your Holy head
(Very sad, but true - vivid, painful imagery)
Good Cinquain formate. Excellent complementary artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement,
~patty~😀
Comment from sunnilicious
Great visual imagery created about the holy sacrifice. Creative as it induces pain and sympathy as we reflect up the religious meaning of the springtime holiday. Well thought out. Nice work.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
Great visual imagery created about the holy sacrifice. Creative as it induces pain and sympathy as we reflect up the religious meaning of the springtime holiday. Well thought out. Nice work.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement,
~patty~😀
Comment from MelB
A wonderful Cinquain and powerful poem about Jesus' death and resurrection. Very nice line and syllable count. The artwork is the perfect compliment.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
A wonderful Cinquain and powerful poem about Jesus' death and resurrection. Very nice line and syllable count. The artwork is the perfect compliment.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement,
~patty~😀
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You're welcome.
Comment from Janet Foor
A well written cinquain about the passion of our Lord. Thank you for sharing. We must never forget the pain and mockery Jesus endured for us.
Very well done patty.
Blessings and happy Easter.
Janet
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
A well written cinquain about the passion of our Lord. Thank you for sharing. We must never forget the pain and mockery Jesus endured for us.
Very well done patty.
Blessings and happy Easter.
Janet
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Hi Janet,
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.
Hope you have a great day,
~patty~😀
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
A religious cinquain. The syllable count is correct and the presentation is beautiful. The topic is religion, not my favorite. You did a good job.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
Hello, my friend,
A religious cinquain. The syllable count is correct and the presentation is beautiful. The topic is religion, not my favorite. You did a good job.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Hi Gypsy,
Thank you for reading my work. I am so glad you enjoyed this cinquain about the Passion of the Christ. I appreciate your time to read and review,
~patty~
Comment from Bucketlist
An excellent succinct cinquain. The picture is less graphic than I could find. I liked the expression in the poem. Thanks for sharing, Trisha
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
An excellent succinct cinquain. The picture is less graphic than I could find. I liked the expression in the poem. Thanks for sharing, Trisha
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Hi Trisha; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments and encouragement,
~patty~