Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Frogbook,

This is an excellent rendition of the crucifixion. I enjoyed your rhymes and the formatting of this poem. I was especially touched by the emotion you put into the last thief's stanzas.

for I hang here, next to Christ,
His life lost, so cheaply priced. (WOW!! Just WOW!)

just a small fix:

not long, I'll sit at Father"s side. (apostrophe)

You've done an awesome job!

Kim

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for your kind comments and this fix. I hate doing things on my phone with poor eyesight but computer is down.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This spiritual poem about three crosses tells how obeys Father's will and He sacrifices life to the cause of sins of mankind; I enjoyed the read in rhymes.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

Thanks so much.

Comment from marybell1

Exceptional

What a beautiful poem for the Easter Season. You chose a very appropriate photo and the idea of "The Three Crosses" was quite unique as I had never thought of what would be going through their minds at that time.
Best of Luck -Easter Wishes.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for the wonderful green star. Truly appreciated.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Great job showing the three perspectives of the three crucifixions. I like the order, too, because the first shows the lostness of refusing salvation. Then the confidence of the Savior Whoknows the future outcome then finally, the peace of the one facing death after receiving forgiveness and salvation.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for these very kind and thoughtful comments.

Comment from Nikki-Nicole

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem.- Two thumbs up!!
It rhymes and has rhythm as it tells the story of Jesus.

-Check for apostrophe: 'Father"s side'- I think you meant Father's side (with an apostrophe instead of a quotation mark)- Just my opinion.

Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

You are so right and i thank u for letting me know. Using phone sans computer and poor eyesight dont mix..ha.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Well that was brilliant to read great rhyme and flow and to hear this coming from the sinner nailed next to him, to realize it is never too late great artwork adding to this outstanding poem thank you fo sharing****kahpot

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for these kind and thoughtful comments.