Comment from dovemarie

Exceptional

Dear frogbook, Beautiful, inspiring poem for this Holy season! I liked your arrangement of quatrains, with couplet at the end. Somber, beautiful picture too. I read it carefully, and found no typos. Dove

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for this wonderful green star. Truly appreciated.

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

What a beautiful poem, written from the three different perspectives of the three who hung on the crosses. I think you got it exactly right. A blessed Easter to you.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I really like how you have told each man's story as h(H)e hangs upon a cross. You do a superb job of characterizing the two thieves. Occasionally your meter/rhythm falters, but overall this Easter tale is well told. Rod

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017

Thanks so much. I have a hard time with that meter at times.

reply by RodG on 18-Apr-2017

My pleasure. Rod

Comment from wondertwin

Excellent

Excellent story in poem form of the crucifixion of Christ, of the forgiveness He offered while hanging on the cross and His love. Great job showing the change of heart of the character start to finish, from mocking to believing. Also, very strong ending stanza! Blessings, AmyJo

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments.

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Frogbook
I can see how much thought you put into your excellent rhyming poem ,writing your reflection of the day of Good Friday.

Gert

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for your kind comments.

reply by Gert sherwood on 18-Apr-2017

You are welcome

Gert

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
It is truly a perfect mach
Your words are so on point.
Thank you for sharing. Well your poem is number 82 ... I have a lot of reviewing to do.
Have a happy Easter Sunday/
Cookie

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017

I hear you as I am behind answering my reviews. Thanks for your time to read.

reply by misscookie on 28-Apr-2017

You're very welcome, I'm way behind again.
Going to a dance tonight so This is it for now.
Cookie

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Well done, Carolyn. Very appropriate for this Good Friday. I especially liked this stanza:

"Who is this man of piety and faith,
with me, a thief, a commoner, a wraith?
I realize, my eyes open oh so slowly now,
You are the Holy One, aren't thou?"

Bravo! Happy Easter. Bob

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017

Thanks so much, Bob. Truly appreciated. JoAnn

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the scenario on Calvary Hill where Jesus was crucified with two others who were real criminals, while He was innocent and died for our sins.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for reading.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is an excellent poem with good rhyming and flow. Topic is one we have all heard before but you express it so well from the perspective of each victim. Great job. A fine poem. Marilyn

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

Thanks so much for reading and your kind comments.

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

This is a very touching poem a lot said here n the sacrifices... keep writing
my fried and good luck, outstanding piece, ~~~~Kerry~

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017

Thanks so much.

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 15-Apr-2017

Your welcome