Three Crosses
A poem of the season26 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes, my friend, you translated this the greatest story in the bible besides the creation really well it reads smoothly and presentation adds the finishing touches well-done regards Jill
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Yes, my friend, you translated this the greatest story in the bible besides the creation really well it reads smoothly and presentation adds the finishing touches well-done regards Jill
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thanks so much for reading and this kind review.
Comment from chcbeck
Great interpretation a great poem. I love the presentation and the way you separate the different voices. A great poem and great read thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Great interpretation a great poem. I love the presentation and the way you separate the different voices. A great poem and great read thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-May-2017
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Marvin Calloway
This is an amazing story/poem_ although it's three stories in one, like the trinity. It's perfect in every way: accurate, details, interesting, emotion, stubborness, redemption.
It lacked for nothing.
Even the picture is perfect.
Marv
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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This is an amazing story/poem_ although it's three stories in one, like the trinity. It's perfect in every way: accurate, details, interesting, emotion, stubborness, redemption.
It lacked for nothing.
Even the picture is perfect.
Marv
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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I am honored that you thought this was perfect. What a lovely thing to say and I am truly thankful for the wonderful 6 stars! JoAnn
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You are welcome.
Comment from JDRBAR
I couldn't add or subtract a single word. Just reading it filled me with a feeling of incomparable emotion. A job well done. I'm sure God has read it also.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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I couldn't add or subtract a single word. Just reading it filled me with a feeling of incomparable emotion. A job well done. I'm sure God has read it also.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2017
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What a fabulous thing for you to say. I am truly humbled by a compliment like this. Thanks so much for my favorite green star also-I am honored.
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What I said was well deserved.
Comment from Mustang Patty
You're interpretation of the events that happened on Golgatha ring very true. The two thieves viewed Christ with different eyes, and one thief was welcomed into Heaven because He believed. Thank you for sharing this well penned poem of faith,
~patty~
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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You're interpretation of the events that happened on Golgatha ring very true. The two thieves viewed Christ with different eyes, and one thief was welcomed into Heaven because He believed. Thank you for sharing this well penned poem of faith,
~patty~
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much for reading and your thoughtful comments.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful poem you have penned about our Lord! I did not see any typos or anything wrong to my ability. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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This is a very beautiful poem you have penned about our Lord! I did not see any typos or anything wrong to my ability. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much!
Comment from royowen
I think you've done a fine job of interpretation of the three crucified souls, the Son of God, Jesus, who died for the sins of the world, the first thief, who mocked and derided Jesus, and the second criminal who had a revelation and knowledge plus faith that this was the means of fulfilment of life, and Jesus recognised the faith of this criminal and said, "truly I say to you, today you will be with me in paradise." Luke 23:43, excellent poetry, in rhyming couplets, great insight and perception of the characters, recognising it's faith that brings salvation not works, Eph. 2:8-9, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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I think you've done a fine job of interpretation of the three crucified souls, the Son of God, Jesus, who died for the sins of the world, the first thief, who mocked and derided Jesus, and the second criminal who had a revelation and knowledge plus faith that this was the means of fulfilment of life, and Jesus recognised the faith of this criminal and said, "truly I say to you, today you will be with me in paradise." Luke 23:43, excellent poetry, in rhyming couplets, great insight and perception of the characters, recognising it's faith that brings salvation not works, Eph. 2:8-9, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much, Roy. Means a lot coming from you.
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Most welcome, good job
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An excellent poem. Easter is my favorite holiday. Not only is it a celebration of Christ's resurrection, but here in our part of the world, the earth mimics the even by new growth.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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An excellent poem. Easter is my favorite holiday. Not only is it a celebration of Christ's resurrection, but here in our part of the world, the earth mimics the even by new growth.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much Thomas. It was a beautiful day here in Colorado.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Frogbook,
You have written something wonderful At least I think so and I'm sure many others will agree. You are great at writing and I always look forward to reading
them.
Kat
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Hi Frogbook,
You have written something wonderful At least I think so and I'm sure many others will agree. You are great at writing and I always look forward to reading
them.
Kat
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thanks, and finally one that was OK for you to read-haha. My Mom really liked it too.
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I look forward to reading more of your work. Kat
Comment from frierajac
Amazing that you wrote this on your phone! It is the simple and understandable
Easter story from the point of view of any commoner. I would not try to say anything myself bout this, although I do appreciate the posting.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Amazing that you wrote this on your phone! It is the simple and understandable
Easter story from the point of view of any commoner. I would not try to say anything myself bout this, although I do appreciate the posting.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much. Truly appreciate you reading and your thoughtful comments.
