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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is going great, Mikey. Really enjoying this inspired play. I think it's great you're launching out into a new genre. It makes the whole site more interesting when people try different things,Giddy
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This is going great, Mikey. Really enjoying this inspired play. I think it's great you're launching out into a new genre. It makes the whole site more interesting when people try different things,Giddy
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Mikey,
I'm reading this with great interest. You have really provided us with some thought provoking ideas to ponder. Wow! The ending here really stops to make the reader think. What if we suddenly had to face everyone who perceived we had wronged them in life, and we were clueless as to who they were or what we had done? I'm curious to see where part three will lead...
Great job so far!
Kim
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Hi Mikey,
I'm reading this with great interest. You have really provided us with some thought provoking ideas to ponder. Wow! The ending here really stops to make the reader think. What if we suddenly had to face everyone who perceived we had wronged them in life, and we were clueless as to who they were or what we had done? I'm curious to see where part three will lead...
Great job so far!
Kim
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
Comment from barbara.wilkey
OUCH!!!!! That would hurt. That being said, it post makes me look at my life and wonder what I have done unknowingly. WOW!! Maybe we should all reflect on our lives.
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OUCH!!!!! That would hurt. That being said, it post makes me look at my life and wonder what I have done unknowingly. WOW!! Maybe we should all reflect on our lives.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
Comment from apky
Another chapter that is so human and well-written, my friend. Like all the others of your stories, I enjoyed this one and its vivid descriptions.
I couldn't help but feel with you, with them.
Happy Easter,
Apky
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Another chapter that is so human and well-written, my friend. Like all the others of your stories, I enjoyed this one and its vivid descriptions.
I couldn't help but feel with you, with them.
Happy Easter,
Apky
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
Comment from Pantygynt
At last we have a teacher promoted to their proper place in the celestial heirarchy! Joking aside, I rather like the idea that god might be a construct of our own individuality, and is without a doubt as likely a myth as all the others. You are almost right about the teacher's great joy, but I think that greater still is finding the child/student that everyone else has written off and turning that one into a happy and productive member of society. in my teaching career i was lucky to come across examples of both types. Our greatest sorrow is that there are so many that we just somehow cannot reach. O yes vwe have all been Lady Bickersfield to too many as well.
I look forward to the next episode.
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At last we have a teacher promoted to their proper place in the celestial heirarchy! Joking aside, I rather like the idea that god might be a construct of our own individuality, and is without a doubt as likely a myth as all the others. You are almost right about the teacher's great joy, but I think that greater still is finding the child/student that everyone else has written off and turning that one into a happy and productive member of society. in my teaching career i was lucky to come across examples of both types. Our greatest sorrow is that there are so many that we just somehow cannot reach. O yes vwe have all been Lady Bickersfield to too many as well.
I look forward to the next episode.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well Janice really gives Michael a dressing down doesn't she. Though this is a long read it held my interest all through, and
to start with you asked some interesting questions of Janice. all the - Is this is? Is it was? I wonder was she your nemesis?
Very interesting, you are running with this one,
cheers,
valda
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Well Janice really gives Michael a dressing down doesn't she. Though this is a long read it held my interest all through, and
to start with you asked some interesting questions of Janice. all the - Is this is? Is it was? I wonder was she your nemesis?
Very interesting, you are running with this one,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Interesting plot but it is not a reflection of you. I guess because you use the name Michael I was expecting a reflection of your character. Wrong.
I am curious to find out what happens to Michael. You engaged me in the story and that is what good writing is about. Well done, Michael.
Gypsy hugs
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Hello, Interesting plot but it is not a reflection of you. I guess because you use the name Michael I was expecting a reflection of your character. Wrong.
I am curious to find out what happens to Michael. You engaged me in the story and that is what good writing is about. Well done, Michael.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
Well, so far, so good. We all have an old lady Bickersfield in our past it seems. Is it bad to call her old lady? HAHA
It shall be interesting to see how the characters interact with Michael as I expect their "sins" in relationship to him were just as sinful, but just from a different POV.
Excellent script, Mav. I can picture this entire show on stage. Maybe chuck in a little lighting direction in the next part.
Ange
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Well, so far, so good. We all have an old lady Bickersfield in our past it seems. Is it bad to call her old lady? HAHA
It shall be interesting to see how the characters interact with Michael as I expect their "sins" in relationship to him were just as sinful, but just from a different POV.
Excellent script, Mav. I can picture this entire show on stage. Maybe chuck in a little lighting direction in the next part.
Ange
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
Comment from damommy
Just what I've always worried about. I think I have been a kind and caring person, but what if He doesn't see it that way?
I think we all will have a lot to answer for, when the time comes.
I'm really enjoying this story. I think what you've written will apply to us all. Waiting for the next chapter. 8-)
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Just what I've always worried about. I think I have been a kind and caring person, but what if He doesn't see it that way?
I think we all will have a lot to answer for, when the time comes.
I'm really enjoying this story. I think what you've written will apply to us all. Waiting for the next chapter. 8-)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
I am liking this a lot, michael. This was just as much fun as the first part, but it took on a very thoughful tone in my opinion. That last paragraph hit home and I bet it struck many nerves. The other side of yhe coin can be a huge revelation, especially if the coin has never been turned over. Looking forward to more. NG
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I am liking this a lot, michael. This was just as much fun as the first part, but it took on a very thoughful tone in my opinion. That last paragraph hit home and I bet it struck many nerves. The other side of yhe coin can be a huge revelation, especially if the coin has never been turned over. Looking forward to more. NG
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
