Heavens , What a Mess
Unfortunately this is true17 total reviews
Comment from schatzling
How cute and adorable this poem is
and so true for so many....
you are not the only one.
It is nice how you put it into words
Very pleasurable to read.
I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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How cute and adorable this poem is
and so true for so many....
you are not the only one.
It is nice how you put it into words
Very pleasurable to read.
I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I have missed you so much. This poem truly defines the true me. I am fun loving, but unfortunately chaos finds me.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. First congratulations for winning the contest. Sometimes we are followed by our mistakes and messes wherever we go. We simply cannot hide them deep enough.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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A very well-written poem. First congratulations for winning the contest. Sometimes we are followed by our mistakes and messes wherever we go. We simply cannot hide them deep enough.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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So true, Over all i like myself, and I have learned to try to pick up after my self and that is what is imortant
Comment from BeasPeas
I just read that you won the contest with this great entry. Good for you. I seem to have the same problem with the messes. You speak for me, too. Great job with your poem. Well written, amusing and true. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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I just read that you won the contest with this great entry. Good for you. I seem to have the same problem with the messes. You speak for me, too. Great job with your poem. Well written, amusing and true. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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Thank you , It was a fun write. The only problem is it is true.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
This a perfect poem about a mess, follows the writing prompt of this contest excellently. I really do know people like this. It used to take me 8 hours per room to clean up my Aunt's home. She used to get angry at me because I cleaned up her home. She would say that because I cleaned up, she could not find anything. She loved her disorder and was used to it.
I can't really relate to being messy but if you ask my husband he will say that I can. I say, however, that when I come home from working an overnight shift, full time job, 5 days a week and sometime OT, then I can be messy. When I wake up from finally just a few hours of sleep, it is then that I clean up. And then is when my home is immaculate.
I love this poem. Good job!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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This a perfect poem about a mess, follows the writing prompt of this contest excellently. I really do know people like this. It used to take me 8 hours per room to clean up my Aunt's home. She used to get angry at me because I cleaned up her home. She would say that because I cleaned up, she could not find anything. She loved her disorder and was used to it.
I can't really relate to being messy but if you ask my husband he will say that I can. I say, however, that when I come home from working an overnight shift, full time job, 5 days a week and sometime OT, then I can be messy. When I wake up from finally just a few hours of sleep, it is then that I clean up. And then is when my home is immaculate.
I love this poem. Good job!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2017
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I would love to be as neat as you and I really try. But it truly just happens. So happy to see you liked the poem. I understand your aunt lol
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Comment from KarenF
Awesome!! I can relate. I had a younger sister who was miss perfect and I was the impetuous older sister who was always leaving things lay. Great job of following contest requirements. Love it!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Awesome!! I can relate. I had a younger sister who was miss perfect and I was the impetuous older sister who was always leaving things lay. Great job of following contest requirements. Love it!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for the great rating. It is definitely me in this poem. but I do love life.
Comment from jyshaffer
I like the brevity of each line. It made it a fast-paced poem. The way you attribute the messes to the objects and not you was witty and gave the poem a Shel Silverstein kind of feel. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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I like the brevity of each line. It made it a fast-paced poem. The way you attribute the messes to the objects and not you was witty and gave the poem a Shel Silverstein kind of feel. Great job! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you Jy, it is the objects fault, after all , it couldn't be my fault. lol
Comment from frogbook
Are you sure you haven't been following me around? LOL. I thought I was alone but sounds like we need to start our on support group. haha. I used to make these plaques that said, "Dull women have immaculate homes". Well, I really am dull now that I'm old so what excuse is mine now? Great entry-gave me a laugh and I am sure it will fair well in the voting.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Are you sure you haven't been following me around? LOL. I thought I was alone but sounds like we need to start our on support group. haha. I used to make these plaques that said, "Dull women have immaculate homes". Well, I really am dull now that I'm old so what excuse is mine now? Great entry-gave me a laugh and I am sure it will fair well in the voting.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you frog, It was when I realized that some people actually use drawers for organizing and not to hide things that I finally realized how ADD I am. lol
Comment from damommy
You've been peeking at me, haven't you? I always say that's why we have doors on closets.
This is just a cute poem, good rhyme and rhythm. I think it's a perfect entry for the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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You've been peeking at me, haven't you? I always say that's why we have doors on closets.
This is just a cute poem, good rhyme and rhythm. I think it's a perfect entry for the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much. Yes, drawers and closets are a place to hide things. I think a lot of writers are so creative that we hate doing mundane things. I saw a list of ADD characteristics that says Add people never use drawers for organization, they just use them to hide things. Then I looked in my drawers and said, well that proves it. Thank you for reading. I appreciate it.
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Comment from valmay
I loved your mess, although many of them could be considered treasures. Do wear white, spots are attractive. I guess hoarding always gets my approval. Your life seems full of fun and talent.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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I loved your mess, although many of them could be considered treasures. Do wear white, spots are attractive. I guess hoarding always gets my approval. Your life seems full of fun and talent.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2017
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thank you, What a fun response. White, oh heavens, i should say dotted.
lol
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
Okay, okay -- have you been following me around? (looking back and forth) Do you have spies in my home right now? As I type? This is so weird. I think you are describing me..... (puzzled)
But much good luck in the contest with this fun entry!!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Okay, okay -- have you been following me around? (looking back and forth) Do you have spies in my home right now? As I type? This is so weird. I think you are describing me..... (puzzled)
But much good luck in the contest with this fun entry!!
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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Thank you, yep that's me a mess. My father once said, My sister could fall into a mud puddle and come out clean and that I could walk through a sterile room and me and room would be a mess as I waked out.
