Parallel Parking
talking myself through it15 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
An imaginary monologue about parallel parking; I enjoyed the fantasy and fun and all appears fantasy as I enjoyed the dreamlike changes as projected in the expression.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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An imaginary monologue about parallel parking; I enjoyed the fantasy and fun and all appears fantasy as I enjoyed the dreamlike changes as projected in the expression.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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well aren't you clever - everyone else thinks it's non-fiction. actually it's just a bit of silliness.
thanks for your review.
Comment from suemac
I love this poem, and the photo is that your set of wheels?Well I wouldn't bother to try and park it just drive round until you can pull in.This poem so reminds me of me I felt every look,every turn of the wheel,before now I have actually touched the front fender then reversed and touched the back fender.Good laugh a real change.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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I love this poem, and the photo is that your set of wheels?Well I wouldn't bother to try and park it just drive round until you can pull in.This poem so reminds me of me I felt every look,every turn of the wheel,before now I have actually touched the front fender then reversed and touched the back fender.Good laugh a real change.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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you've got me laughing. both fenders??? oh boy!
thanks for the kind words.
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great we can't all be advanced drivers.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a hilarious contest entry, Heh-heh-heh. I sure got a kick out of it, and of.course the car in front is ready to pull away, happens all the time. I myself will avoid a parallel park at any cost, driving around the block several times. lol Good luck to you. ~Kerry~
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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This is a hilarious contest entry, Heh-heh-heh. I sure got a kick out of it, and of.course the car in front is ready to pull away, happens all the time. I myself will avoid a parallel park at any cost, driving around the block several times. lol Good luck to you. ~Kerry~
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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I must admit I hate it, but some places I go that's all there is.
many thanks for your enjoyment and good wishes.
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lol, that is to funny
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This poem is ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS!
--The funny thing is that some people can't parallel park. It takes them forever and a day to even try and when they're done, half of their vehicle is still in the road.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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This poem is ABSOLUTELY HILARIOUS!
--The funny thing is that some people can't parallel park. It takes them forever and a day to even try and when they're done, half of their vehicle is still in the road.
Thanks for sharing your poem.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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thank you!
My granddaughter told me their instructor said parallel parking was optional. optional!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, look on the bright side, Anonymous Poet/driver.
At least with the guy parked in front of you out of the way, you'll have a lot more room to navigate.
Nice 'Vette. We wouldn't want to ding that now, would we?
Besides, Corvette bodies are made of fiberglass, so you're more likely to crack it than you are to ding it.
That ain't good!
Speaking of "good", "good" luck in the contest.
~Dean :)
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reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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Well, look on the bright side, Anonymous Poet/driver.
At least with the guy parked in front of you out of the way, you'll have a lot more room to navigate.
Nice 'Vette. We wouldn't want to ding that now, would we?
Besides, Corvette bodies are made of fiberglass, so you're more likely to crack it than you are to ding it.
That ain't good!
Speaking of "good", "good" luck in the contest.
~Dean :)
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
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heaven "forfend!" this chile don' wan' no cracked fiberglass! however, my SUV is BIGGER! HA!
thanks for the good wishes!
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My pleasure. :)
