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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Sacrifice"
a collection of my poetry

69 total reviews 
Comment from Benny Beeharry
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Hi good friend, this is infact a great sacrifice, such as has not been done before, and we all need to understand the value of it.
But the only thing that I do not understand is we give him very little for this sacrifice,except lips praise.

Danny Jock

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece. We can honor His sacrifice by the way we live our lives and our belief in Him,

    Hope you have a great day,
    ~patty~😀

Comment from godlucifer
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blood shed,blood full of tears. the triumph of blood,the triumph of tears. the rise and fall of jesus is the rise and fall of our blood n tears. once we rise we rise over triumph and once we fall we fall over tears. your poem was delightful and delightfully written. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review. I so appreciate your kind words,
    ~patty~
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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Adored this as I adore Christ and all who love him and live by him. This is precious, a wonderful expression of spiritual love and the sadness that brings. love Meia x

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review. I so appreciate your kind words,
    ~patty~
Comment from c_lucas
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There is no reason to keep Jesus out of your life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words making for a very inspiring. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review. I so appreciate your kind words,
    ~patty~
Comment from rtobaygo
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Good afternoon, Patty

Being raised in the Greek Orthodox Catholic Church I came to appreciate his love and the sacrifice he made for us. So few words, yet so many images.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review. Easter is very special to me. I do my best to honor Him and His sacrifice,
    ~patty~
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks, Patty, for this great Easter message in a simple 5-3-5 (a lune, I think.) Yes, praise Jesus for His triumph over sin and death for us. He is risen, indeed!

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review. Easter is very special to me. I do my best to honor Him and His sacrifice,
    ~patty~
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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A great reminder at this time of year. I read of an event that decided to leave Easter out completely.
The event wasn't advertised as an Easter egg hunt. It was simply an egg hunt.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review. Easter is very special to me. I do my best to honor Him and His sacrifice,
    ~patty~
Comment from nuthead
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Well-constructed 5-3-5 poem. The image and background colour highlight your words beautifully. I love this line and the truth behind it: "He rose in triumph"

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review. Easter is very special to me. I do my best to honor Him and His sacrifice,
    ~patty~
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I love this time of year when we are all reminded of the sacrifice Jesus made for us and how so many people praise Him. It's just lovely to read everyone's thoughts on His love. We are all blessed by God and should appreciate Him more. Wonderful poem and beautiful picture. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review. Easter is very special to me. I do my best to honor Him and His sacrifice,
    ~patty~
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
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Certainly the ultimate sacrifice put so eloquently in your words.
A wonderful 5-3-5, which struck a chord.
Have a lovely evening Patty.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    thank you for stopping by to read and review. Easter is very special to me. I do my best to honor Him and His sacrifice,
    ~patty~