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My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Sacrifice"
a collection of my poetry

69 total reviews 
Comment from Rlegel99
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Poem about the sacrifice of Jesus for our sins. The artwork works well with this piece of poetry. This poem flows well. Your word choice made me think about what life might be like in the absence of this sacrifice.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    Hi ,

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

    Hope you have a great day,
    ~patty~😀
Comment from Bill O'Bier
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In my deepest, darkest moments, what really gets me through is a prayer. Sometimes my prayer is - Help me. Sometimes it's just - Thank you. What I've discovered is that this communication with the lord will always get me through because I know my support, my help, is just a prayer away. Thanks for a lovely haiku poem. Happy Easter.
Bill~

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    Hi Bill,

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

    Hope you have a great day,
    ~patty~😀
Comment from Dan-C
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem of God's love. At this special time of year we all need to remember the reason we celebrate Easter. The foundation of our faith.
Thank you,
Dan

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    Hi Dan,

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

    Hope you have a great day,
    ~patty~😀
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, my friend,

True love is to be willing to sacrifice like He did for us. So many Christian holidays seem to have become commercial exploits and we need reminders like this spiritual poem. Good job!

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    Hi Gypsy,

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

    Hope you have a great day,
    ~patty~😀
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Mustangpatty1029
Just in three lines and you picture of Our Lord tells the story of Jesus being crucified and his resuscitation
Nicely done

Gert

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    Hi Gert,

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

    Hope you have a great day,
    ~patty~😀
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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He rose in triumph <-- Yes, good last line. TRIUMPH, not defeat.

The Romans thought they had killed Jesus and ended His influence, when actually they had followed God's will so that His Son could die for His followers' sins. It had to happen. The Romans, and the Jews who betrayed Christ, were just pawns in God's plan.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    Hi Phyllis,

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece. I personally believe Judas always gets a bum rap - but he was chosen for the job.

    Hope you have a great day,
    ~patty~😀
Comment from dragonpoet
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Well written and Illustrated lune poem about the passion of Christ. It tells what he did for all those who choose to believe.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    Hi ,

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

    Hope you have a great day,
    ~patty~😀
reply by dragonpoet on 12-Apr-2017
    HI,

    You are so very welcome.

    Happy Easter.

    Joan
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Hello my friend amen and amen again a very meaningful poem in such a short form well presented we are blessed to have such a wonderful God well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    Hi Jill,

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

    Hope you have a great day,
    ~patty~😀
Comment from jusylee72
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The images are well spoken here in so many ways. Thank you for sharing your beliefs with us. I think short poems are hard to judge so I put them in two categories. Like and dislike. I like this one.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

    Hope you have a great day, so glad you liked it,
    ~patty~😀

Comment from Badger_29
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A wonderful, powerful, poignant and timely message. You have managed to convey so much in this simple, elegant 5-3-5 format.
The image is superb, the writing shining with sustaining faith and hope.

A wonderful time to share this inspirational writing.

Blessings,
and
Happy Easter

Brother Badger

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017

    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I always appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this piece.

    Hope you have a great day, and a wonderful Easter weekend,
    ~patty~😀