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Comment from nomi338
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A clear indication that our society is getting dumber and dumber with each succeeding generation. Soon we are going to have a major portion of our society dumb as hell and no will have the slightest idea of why or how.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2017
    Thanks, nomi, for reviewing this. Bill
Comment from frogbook
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A true and interesting observation that is surprisingly accurate. It's rather sad this disappears along with cursive writing. Some things should not be replaced, I think.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    It surprised me when seniors in high school couldn't tell time on a clock face.
Comment from cholb22
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Luckily we have taught our kids to read a clock face, unfortunately this digital world we live in is taking over though.
A great little poem, bringing another thing that we don't think about enough up!

Thank you for sharing :)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    I had a senior in class looking at his Iphone. I asked him to stop and he said he was just checking the time. I pointed out the clock on the wall. He couldn't tell time on that type of clock. I later found that many found it difficult and therefore stupid.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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You have penned an excellent poem that speaks the truth.
'Most kids can't tell clock face time'- It's true, and some adults can't either. That's why so many prefer the digital.
Great choice of artwork: The image is very good and is a perfect match for this poem.
Thanks for sharing this.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2017


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
    I had that discussion a few years back with a class when the term "got your six" came up. Also the title "Twelve O'clock High" was mentioned. The reference to a face clock was lost on many.