My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Food"a collection of my poetry
76 total reviews
Comment from cholb22
...can't actually write this review as I am raiding the fridge for salad and fruit now!!
A great poem, it is simple ...ground, farm and then consumption! Simple foods are natural and therefore healthy. Beautifully written piece and an enjoyable read, well done and thank you for sharing!! :)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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...can't actually write this review as I am raiding the fridge for salad and fruit now!!
A great poem, it is simple ...ground, farm and then consumption! Simple foods are natural and therefore healthy. Beautifully written piece and an enjoyable read, well done and thank you for sharing!! :)
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from nancyrabbrose
You have crafted a very important poem, one that is worthy to be framed and hung in every kitchen. It is a good reminder of nourishing, healthy food and why we must eat. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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You have crafted a very important poem, one that is worthy to be framed and hung in every kitchen. It is a good reminder of nourishing, healthy food and why we must eat. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from Thal1959
This is nicely done about a universal subject - everyone enjoys eating; and not just for survival. But this is another form that has too many regulations for me.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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This is nicely done about a universal subject - everyone enjoys eating; and not just for survival. But this is another form that has too many regulations for me.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I bet you could do it. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
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It is always a pleasure for me, Patty.
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
WHAT A GREAT IDEA FOR FOOD
LOOKS DELISIOUS MY FRIEND
I MYSELF LOVE MY FRUIT WELL DONE IN PRESENTATION
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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WHAT A GREAT IDEA FOR FOOD
LOOKS DELISIOUS MY FRIEND
I MYSELF LOVE MY FRUIT WELL DONE IN PRESENTATION
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Food is delicious and if you eat the right kind it can certainly bring you energy. I hate cooking but I would love to be a taste tester somewhere, you know helping them perfect recipes. lol. Great job
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Food is delicious and if you eat the right kind it can certainly bring you energy. I hate cooking but I would love to be a taste tester somewhere, you know helping them perfect recipes. lol. Great job
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from RGstar
Not only energy, Sandra, but taste, for how I would give anything to have some of the above right now. Your words awaken the lust to partake.
Bravo.
Have a great day.
RGstar
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Not only energy, Sandra, but taste, for how I would give anything to have some of the above right now. Your words awaken the lust to partake.
Bravo.
Have a great day.
RGstar
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from judiverse
Great work with this format, Patty. I'm a foodie, so this definitely appeals to me. It's very colorful, too. We are blessed to have such bounty from nature, and don't even think about it. We take for granted all the variety we see in the supermarket. We did have some problem getting fresh strawberries during the winter. How disappointing! Very enjoyable, and it makes us think how fortunate we are. (Just saw a presentation about the Irish potato famine.) judi
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Great work with this format, Patty. I'm a foodie, so this definitely appeals to me. It's very colorful, too. We are blessed to have such bounty from nature, and don't even think about it. We take for granted all the variety we see in the supermarket. We did have some problem getting fresh strawberries during the winter. How disappointing! Very enjoyable, and it makes us think how fortunate we are. (Just saw a presentation about the Irish potato famine.) judi
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Hi Judi; thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
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You're welcome, Patty. Very enjoyable. judi
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Patty
Based on this requirement (A Clarity Pyramid is a poem consisting of two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all) you were spot on. The picture was a fruit and berries lovers delight. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Good morning, Patty
Based on this requirement (A Clarity Pyramid is a poem consisting of two triplets and a single line (7 lines in all) you were spot on. The picture was a fruit and berries lovers delight. Enjoyed.
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
Hi Ray; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from SeanFox16
Very clever little poem. To me it speaks of the importance of eating organic produce, the bounty that God provided for us, as opposed to genetically modified, processed garbage that I believe is a big reason behind the rise of many forms of cancer and other diseases today. Well done.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Very clever little poem. To me it speaks of the importance of eating organic produce, the bounty that God provided for us, as opposed to genetically modified, processed garbage that I believe is a big reason behind the rise of many forms of cancer and other diseases today. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
Comment from XGoneX
Hi Patty,
I can only write free verse. I'm a disaster with syllable count and poetry formats. You have my admiration to write this poem and still convey a message; how good food is important to give us energy.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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Hi Patty,
I can only write free verse. I'm a disaster with syllable count and poetry formats. You have my admiration to write this poem and still convey a message; how good food is important to give us energy.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
