My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Food"a collection of my poetry
76 total reviews
Comment from Donya Quijote
I am not familiar with this type of poetry. You do meet the conditions provided in your notes. Commendable.
I like how your poem progresses. You tell it just like is, matter of fact-ly. Personally, I like the French view of food, it's about pleasure and not just sustenance. Well done clarity poem. Thanks for sharing...
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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I am not familiar with this type of poetry. You do meet the conditions provided in your notes. Commendable.
I like how your poem progresses. You tell it just like is, matter of fact-ly. Personally, I like the French view of food, it's about pleasure and not just sustenance. Well done clarity poem. Thanks for sharing...
Comment Written 11-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. This poem was a struggle to meet the requirements of the form. I'm glad you saw its merits,
~patty~😀
Comment from ceramic
A nice food pyramid well written. It conjures up food related emotions but not always the right ones. The poem is sufficiently general to avoid criticism but the graphic is all fruit, containing some good and bad (high fructose).
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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A nice food pyramid well written. It conjures up food related emotions but not always the right ones. The poem is sufficiently general to avoid criticism but the graphic is all fruit, containing some good and bad (high fructose).
Comment Written 11-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. This poem was a struggle to meet the requirements of the form. I'm glad you saw its merits,
~patty~😀
Comment from Mastery
So well done, Patty. You are quite the poet. I realize how good you really are the more I read of your work recently. I like the closing line or satori:
"Just what we need for energy"
Brilliant work, my friend. Blessings, Bob
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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So well done, Patty. You are quite the poet. I realize how good you really are the more I read of your work recently. I like the closing line or satori:
"Just what we need for energy"
Brilliant work, my friend. Blessings, Bob
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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Hi Bob; thank you for stopping by to read and review. This poem was a struggle to meet the requirements of the form. I'm glad you saw its merits,
~patty~😀
Comment from ronnie k
The simplest of the post, given to the style makes for an interesting and meaning post, thank you for your posting an enjoyable review.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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The simplest of the post, given to the style makes for an interesting and meaning post, thank you for your posting an enjoyable review.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. This poem was a struggle to meet the requirements of the form. I'm glad you saw its merits,
~patty~😀
Comment from Sis Cat
I review this as I eat an Ambrosia apple. Yum!
This is a great Clarity Pyramid celebrating not only food, but where it comes from:
from nature's bounty
harvested from the ground
taken fresh from farm to store
Your poem is affirming and encouraging people to eat more fruits and vegetables.
Thank you for sharing your well-crafted poem.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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I review this as I eat an Ambrosia apple. Yum!
This is a great Clarity Pyramid celebrating not only food, but where it comes from:
from nature's bounty
harvested from the ground
taken fresh from farm to store
Your poem is affirming and encouraging people to eat more fruits and vegetables.
Thank you for sharing your well-crafted poem.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. This poem was a struggle to meet the requirements of the form. I'm glad you saw its merits,
~patty~😀
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image and nice presentation.
-A good poem with a good format.
-Effective adj. in part one.
-Good description in part two;
it shows the importance of
nourishment from good food.
-Good final quote.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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-Great image and nice presentation.
-A good poem with a good format.
-Effective adj. in part one.
-Good description in part two;
it shows the importance of
nourishment from good food.
-Good final quote.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. Your kind words of encouragement are greatly appreciated,
~patty~😀
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You are very welcome, Patty.
Comment from Lena Borghi
I remember writing one of these once. I think the topic of mine was "storm."
I think you chose a wonderful topic for yours and I especially like your last line as it brings the poem full circle, giving it relevance. Thanks for sharing.
Best,
Lena
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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I remember writing one of these once. I think the topic of mine was "storm."
I think you chose a wonderful topic for yours and I especially like your last line as it brings the poem full circle, giving it relevance. Thanks for sharing.
Best,
Lena
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~😀
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a descriptive poem, well constructed in its succinct and easy movement - apparently, in complete conformity with the poem's form and rendered with style and taste...
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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In my opinion, a descriptive poem, well constructed in its succinct and easy movement - apparently, in complete conformity with the poem's form and rendered with style and taste...
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~😀
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You are most welcome, Patty...Eve
Comment from sunnilicious
That photograph looks fantastic. Raw fruits and vegetables have virtually no calories in a cup (50 to 100). I love your poem. It was an enjoyable read. Kept my interest. Good narrative writing style. Very energetic. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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That photograph looks fantastic. Raw fruits and vegetables have virtually no calories in a cup (50 to 100). I love your poem. It was an enjoyable read. Kept my interest. Good narrative writing style. Very energetic. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,
~patty~😀
Comment from dmt1967
The picture of the fruit pizza looked good enough to eat and made me feel really hungry. I liked the words as they portrayed a healthy diet and fitted the poem really well. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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The picture of the fruit pizza looked good enough to eat and made me feel really hungry. I liked the words as they portrayed a healthy diet and fitted the poem really well. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2017
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thank you for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement, 😀
~patty~
