Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Patty, I think you did a terrific job on the Pleiades, I never did one either. You did what you set out for to portray the loneliness. I love that you added walk the door
maybe serenity awaits. Well done. ~Kerry~

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017

Thank you so much for your review of this poem. I really struggled with this write. At first I thought 7 lines, 6 syllables per line - how hard can it be? Yea...
~patty~

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 04-Apr-2017

I could imagine the difficulty, You did it great though

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Patty, this is an interesting format and contains a lot of truths that provoke us to think about being a shut-in without the ability to get out unless someone helps them.
I had to take this to classic to be able to read the words on the dark red. If the background were a bit lighter I would have been able to read it quite well.

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2017

Hi Patricia; thank you for the heads up about the color - I will go in and edit. Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words,
~patty~

reply by patcelaw on 04-Apr-2017

The color change makes it much better for my dim eyesight.