My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Solitary"a collection of my poetry
62 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Yes! Difficult to execute! Yes! One would struggle with such a task. But this does no look to me like you struggled at all my friend. Kudo's on this wonderfully crafted piece. Point of view has clearly been spoken.
God bless!'
Steve
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Yes! Difficult to execute! Yes! One would struggle with such a task. But this does no look to me like you struggled at all my friend. Kudo's on this wonderfully crafted piece. Point of view has clearly been spoken.
God bless!'
Steve
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
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My pleasure!
Comment from rjuselius
my freind suffers from chronic psychosis. she hasn't left her appartment in a year, she only is drunk every day. her husband tries to keep her happy by buying more alcohol. if she would stop drinking, she would get the medications she needs for the mental illlness. it's such a shame, she is only 31. her husband is 28. their lives are destroyd.
thank you for sharing!
blessigns!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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my freind suffers from chronic psychosis. she hasn't left her appartment in a year, she only is drunk every day. her husband tries to keep her happy by buying more alcohol. if she would stop drinking, she would get the medications she needs for the mental illlness. it's such a shame, she is only 31. her husband is 28. their lives are destroyd.
thank you for sharing!
blessigns!
rebekka x
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Hi Rebekka; I am so sorry for your friend. The drinking definitely doesn't help, and he probably has no idea of what to do. I will keep all of you in my prayers,
~patty~
Comment from Susanjohn
I think you got it! i totally got that sense of loneliness,,,I can see it all in my mind. Someone just stuck on that couch all alone....so sad. Well done!!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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I think you got it! i totally got that sense of loneliness,,,I can see it all in my mind. Someone just stuck on that couch all alone....so sad. Well done!!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement,
~patty~
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OH THAT is SOOOOO CUTE!!!
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend , writing to measures is a very tough job for me. I never tried it because I knew my weakness. I prefer now to let my thoughts flow. Still I admire those who successfully put their thoughts in beautiful frames and this write is one of them.
Closed inside one hardly knows what blessings are to be had outside.
Danny Jock.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Hi friend , writing to measures is a very tough job for me. I never tried it because I knew my weakness. I prefer now to let my thoughts flow. Still I admire those who successfully put their thoughts in beautiful frames and this write is one of them.
Closed inside one hardly knows what blessings are to be had outside.
Danny Jock.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review, Danny Jock. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement. I totally agree with you about 'fitting' my words to a poetic form, but I'm trying to push myself to do new things.
~patty~
Comment from Rasmine
You captured this well. I am not shut-in yet, but sometimes too sore to walk up and down the hill--I want to do this for exercise. :) It works too :)
Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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You captured this well. I am not shut-in yet, but sometimes too sore to walk up and down the hill--I want to do this for exercise. :) It works too :)
Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments.
~patty~
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Cute :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a very good Pleiade poem, the form I am yet to try. I loved your S alliteration.
I loved the last line - "Serenity Awaits".
A very pleasant offering g today _
- thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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This is a very good Pleiade poem, the form I am yet to try. I loved your S alliteration.
I loved the last line - "Serenity Awaits".
A very pleasant offering g today _
- thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
Thank you so much for dropping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, simply superb in this clever and artful soliloquy of solitude in a both expectant and hopeful conclusion - perfect in its compliance with the form...
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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In my opinion, simply superb in this clever and artful soliloquy of solitude in a both expectant and hopeful conclusion - perfect in its compliance with the form...
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
Thank you so much for your wonderful review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
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You are so welcome, Patty...Eve
Comment from Rlegel99
Well written poem about a shut in. This poem flows well. Your word choice paints a vivid picture for readers. The artwork adds to the overall feeling of this piece. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Well written poem about a shut in. This poem flows well. Your word choice paints a vivid picture for readers. The artwork adds to the overall feeling of this piece. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words of encouragement,
~patty~
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Patty,
I think you know how much I enjoy the Pleiades poem style. You have done well with your seven lines, six syllables each, and started each with the letter s, as well as your title, which gives a strong sense of consonance (letter S) to this piece.
I think you delivered your intended message well.
Nice work!
Kim
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Hi Patty,
I think you know how much I enjoy the Pleiades poem style. You have done well with your seven lines, six syllables each, and started each with the letter s, as well as your title, which gives a strong sense of consonance (letter S) to this piece.
I think you delivered your intended message well.
Nice work!
Kim
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. Your words of encouragement mean a great deal to me,
~patty~
Comment from w.j.debi
I don't believe I've seen this form before. You nailed it according to the notes you provide. A thoughtful and thought-provoking verse about loneliness. Why do some people do it to themselves? Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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I don't believe I've seen this form before. You nailed it according to the notes you provide. A thoughtful and thought-provoking verse about loneliness. Why do some people do it to themselves? Well done.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments,
~patty~
