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Comment from chcbeck
I love the idea behind the script and to think this I an area which needs more covering. There's so much scope for situations. For me the main point that I leave with is that normal life is no longer the reality.
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I love the idea behind the script and to think this I an area which needs more covering. There's so much scope for situations. For me the main point that I leave with is that normal life is no longer the reality.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
Comment from lyenochka
The characterization is very well done. There are so many people with alternate internet identities (and gender, too, I guess). The kids' dialog is very believable and Gert is innocently funny.
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The characterization is very well done. There are so many people with alternate internet identities (and gender, too, I guess). The kids' dialog is very believable and Gert is innocently funny.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
I think this is a terrific idea if you go in the direction of a spy thriller or something. There's great potential for plot and character development that could involve a lot of humour (particularly with the real life family) and drama.
Super idea. I look forward to seeing how you develop the plot. :))
one nit: deceipt (deceit) therein.
Keep going cause this is gonna be good.
Ange
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I think this is a terrific idea if you go in the direction of a spy thriller or something. There's great potential for plot and character development that could involve a lot of humour (particularly with the real life family) and drama.
Super idea. I look forward to seeing how you develop the plot. :))
one nit: deceipt (deceit) therein.
Keep going cause this is gonna be good.
Ange
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This is good.
Very well-written.
Nicely polished script.
The 'Bill' character's nicknames show humor.
-My oldest son started out with several nicknames. When he was two, we finally settled on one.-
Title?- Have you decided on one yet?
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
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This is good.
Very well-written.
Nicely polished script.
The 'Bill' character's nicknames show humor.
-My oldest son started out with several nicknames. When he was two, we finally settled on one.-
Title?- Have you decided on one yet?
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 04-Apr-2017
