Chasing of the Wind.
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Long Lost Father Is Here."Conflict between the Human Needs and the Divinity
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a creative chapter and very enjoyable to read. The dialogue is excellent and the writing easily kept my interest. Great job.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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This is a creative chapter and very enjoyable to read. The dialogue is excellent and the writing easily kept my interest. Great job.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2017
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Thanks Michael for the encouraging comment and nice rating. I am improving my writing skills and style. I hope you will wnjoy the other chapters of this novel Best regards and wishes.
Arun
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
Great title.- Two thumbs up!
Great artwork!
This a well-written chapter.
Free of grammatical errors!
Nicely polished material.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Great title.- Two thumbs up!
Great artwork!
This a well-written chapter.
Free of grammatical errors!
Nicely polished material.
Thank you for sharing this with us.
Good luck with your future writing!
-Nicole-
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you Nikki: I am improving my writing and using the Advance Editor. I used to rush to post something but now I have disciplined myself to go back and read mu work aloud, inspect sentences for the common errors. Best regards and wishes. Hope you will read my novel, 'Chasing of the Wind'. It will be ending in next two chapters.
