My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Nightly Chatter"a collection of my poetry
44 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Very funny and sad to say very often true. Men and women are seldom on the same planet, (Think Venus and Mars) let alone the same wavelength.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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Very funny and sad to say very often true. Men and women are seldom on the same planet, (Think Venus and Mars) let alone the same wavelength.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from RGstar
Nothing wrong with the exchanges, Patty, I am just trying to work out who the negative of the two are...which is not bad at all. It makes you think.
My best wishes.
Keep striving.
RG
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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Nothing wrong with the exchanges, Patty, I am just trying to work out who the negative of the two are...which is not bad at all. It makes you think.
My best wishes.
Keep striving.
RG
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from Rubylou
Hello,
I have never seen or even heard of this form of poetry before. Your author's notes were very helpful in understanding.
I like the larger letters for the the provoking questions and the smaller font for the reply and final questiion- great strategy.
Rubylou
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Hello,
I have never seen or even heard of this form of poetry before. Your author's notes were very helpful in understanding.
I like the larger letters for the the provoking questions and the smaller font for the reply and final questiion- great strategy.
Rubylou
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Patty, I had to read your author notes to get the hang of this form which I have not met before. Your work fits the bill perfectly. I like the bold questions followed by the pale answers. LOL. Quite believable really., - typical responses Very good. Warm regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Hi Patty, I had to read your author notes to get the hang of this form which I have not met before. Your work fits the bill perfectly. I like the bold questions followed by the pale answers. LOL. Quite believable really., - typical responses Very good. Warm regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from Writeling
A fitting date to post this enigmatic poem...... An unusual idea that works on several levels. The final line sums up their vinegar mix:
'Oh, are we on that again?'
With best wishes, Writeling
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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A fitting date to post this enigmatic poem...... An unusual idea that works on several levels. The final line sums up their vinegar mix:
'Oh, are we on that again?'
With best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your lovely words and the array of stars.
~patty~
Comment from frierajac
this is the kind of comment that makes me want to write. It is an inspiration
for some people to understand the issue of other women. It also makes one think
about the role that sexuality plays in the culture these days
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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this is the kind of comment that makes me want to write. It is an inspiration
for some people to understand the issue of other women. It also makes one think
about the role that sexuality plays in the culture these days
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from Bucketlist
This is an interesting style of communication between lovers. Unfortunately you also captured the disconnect in it as well. The 5-7-5 was perfect in both parts. This lovers' sedoka has a sad tone if we interpret that conversational mismatch. I enjoyed a lot.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This is an interesting style of communication between lovers. Unfortunately you also captured the disconnect in it as well. The 5-7-5 was perfect in both parts. This lovers' sedoka has a sad tone if we interpret that conversational mismatch. I enjoyed a lot.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
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No problem Patty, I think too deep/ much sometimes !!!!!! You are welcome
Comment from rjuselius
this reminds me of a friend of mine who is so stingy it's not even funny. she thinks she holds the key to the throne and shuold be treated that way every day..
thnak you for sharing!
sorry for rambling..
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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this reminds me of a friend of mine who is so stingy it's not even funny. she thinks she holds the key to the throne and shuold be treated that way every day..
thnak you for sharing!
sorry for rambling..
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
Comment from marybell1
An interesting form of poem which I have not come across before, so I cannot make any suggestions but it seemed ok to me as you followed the rules.
Best of luck.
marybell1.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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An interesting form of poem which I have not come across before, so I cannot make any suggestions but it seemed ok to me as you followed the rules.
Best of luck.
marybell1.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from nuthead
This is a new form for me too. But going by your author notes it looks like you nailed it both the syllable count, and the question and answer.
The questioning female, the bread winning eye rolling male. Not this again.
This felt authentic. I can see this taking place in a real relationship. Good questions, real responses.
Nice!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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This is a new form for me too. But going by your author notes it looks like you nailed it both the syllable count, and the question and answer.
The questioning female, the bread winning eye rolling male. Not this again.
This felt authentic. I can see this taking place in a real relationship. Good questions, real responses.
Nice!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~
