From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Cottage"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Badger_29
Great metaphor. Superbly written, a warm and fuzzy commentary on one of life's greatest treasures. The image really adds, as there is no snow. Nicely stated, with good contrast. Loved the
"featherbed of love" Warmth . . .
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Great metaphor. Superbly written, a warm and fuzzy commentary on one of life's greatest treasures. The image really adds, as there is no snow. Nicely stated, with good contrast. Loved the
"featherbed of love" Warmth . . .
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you sincerely Badger, for this lovely review and I looked far and wide for artwork with real snow on the roof but I guess it all must have melted this time of year! All the best and blessings always! Vance
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
A wonderful memory shared of snow covered cottage with friends nearby.
It paints a warm, homely feel to the community.
Thanks for sharing
Have a great evening
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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A wonderful memory shared of snow covered cottage with friends nearby.
It paints a warm, homely feel to the community.
Thanks for sharing
Have a great evening
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Now that I have your lovely and uplifting review, Indeed, I will have a lovely evening and think of you with sincere Gratitude! So glad to hear from you and hoping to see you again often: HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nicely composed. I felt cozy just reading it. The image you chose to accompany your poem is perfect. The featherbed made me feel wrapped in comfort and love. Nicely done. Marilyn
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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This is very nicely composed. I felt cozy just reading it. The image you chose to accompany your poem is perfect. The featherbed made me feel wrapped in comfort and love. Nicely done. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this Marilyn. Your feedback in lovely review is heartwarming and much appreciated! Blessings! Vance
Comment from Janet Foor
Lovely imagery in this beautiful and warm poem Vance. I loved each line which reminded me of times with good friends in simpler times.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Lovely imagery in this beautiful and warm poem Vance. I loved each line which reminded me of times with good friends in simpler times.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you so much Janet, and I'm really glad to know this brought you warming and kind memories. Your lovely review here just did that for me! Blessings and hugs! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from royowen
I could certainly liken this to good comfortable friendship dear Vance, friendship and family certainly build a keep around, combine it with the Lord's peace and comfort, and one has a perfect package, the horizontal and the vertical working together...the cross. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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I could certainly liken this to good comfortable friendship dear Vance, friendship and family certainly build a keep around, combine it with the Lord's peace and comfort, and one has a perfect package, the horizontal and the vertical working together...the cross. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much Roy....I really appreciate you kind review1 Vance
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Most welcome Vance
Comment from robyn corum
Grayness,
This is a sweet and insightful poem, and I enjoyed it very much. My only negative comment is in regard to the capitalization of some of the lines. Since it is actually one long sentence, I would not capitalize any of the words after the first line, so that the revised poem would read:
When the snows of friendship
(c)over the cottage of your life
you may sleep always,
(w)armly, in
(y)our featherbed
(o)f love
Just a thought. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Grayness,
This is a sweet and insightful poem, and I enjoyed it very much. My only negative comment is in regard to the capitalization of some of the lines. Since it is actually one long sentence, I would not capitalize any of the words after the first line, so that the revised poem would read:
When the snows of friendship
(c)over the cottage of your life
you may sleep always,
(w)armly, in
(y)our featherbed
(o)f love
Just a thought. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
Seems like a good idea robyn and I will make those changes with sincere thanks! Vance
Comment from Nan Beeson
Your poem about your experience with your cottage that reflected peace and love reminded me of when I spent a few years in Big Bear Lake (Boulder Bay) overlooking the beautiful peaceful view.... My condo was opposite the ski lift and the Jacuzzi was a few feet from my front door.
Re your poem....
When the snows of friendship
Cover the cottage of your life
you may sleep always,
Warmly, in
Your featherbed
Of love
Great imagery and your referring to the cottage as when the snows of friendship
cover the cottage of ones life -- he or she may sleep always, "Warmly," in ones bed with the feel of soft warm feathers of love embracing the person.
Although I never had a feathered, but slept in one when I was in Finland.... My little precious Yyorky, "Corky," serves me equally well sicne he cuddles close and never leaves my side -- in or out of bed....
A very comforting read, Vance....at least that is the way it effected me.......
Thank you for sharing it..Nan:))
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Your poem about your experience with your cottage that reflected peace and love reminded me of when I spent a few years in Big Bear Lake (Boulder Bay) overlooking the beautiful peaceful view.... My condo was opposite the ski lift and the Jacuzzi was a few feet from my front door.
Re your poem....
When the snows of friendship
Cover the cottage of your life
you may sleep always,
Warmly, in
Your featherbed
Of love
Great imagery and your referring to the cottage as when the snows of friendship
cover the cottage of ones life -- he or she may sleep always, "Warmly," in ones bed with the feel of soft warm feathers of love embracing the person.
Although I never had a feathered, but slept in one when I was in Finland.... My little precious Yyorky, "Corky," serves me equally well sicne he cuddles close and never leaves my side -- in or out of bed....
A very comforting read, Vance....at least that is the way it effected me.......
Thank you for sharing it..Nan:))
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks Nan for this lovely review and sharing your memories too. I also sleep with my little "Teacup" Yorkie "Bitsy" as she is on extended duty from Heaven, here as my personal GUARDIAN ANGEL, and she takes it seriously. I AM TRULY BLESSED! Vance
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Oh, Vance.... How wonderful.....If only more people shared your view as I copied it below...
I also sleep with my little "Teacup" Yorkie "Bitsy" as she is on extended duty from Heaven, here as my personal GUARDIAN ANGEL, and she takes it seriously. I AM TRULY BLESSED!
I feel the same way about my little Yorkie, "Corky".....so that makes both of us "Truly Blessed."
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believe me Nan, it is true, I'm certain as nothing else could explain her behavior nor my elevated and virtually CONSTANT STATE OF GRATITUDE! Vance
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem in remembrance of the good times of the past. It seems the small things always stick to our memory for a very long time with us.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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A very well-written poem in remembrance of the good times of the past. It seems the small things always stick to our memory for a very long time with us.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks so much Sandra, for your kind review! It is certainly appreciated and I'm delighted that you enjoyed it! Vance
Comment from persevere
Describing friendship in terms of snow and extending it to the warmth of a featherbed is unique. If one is surrounded by caring friends one certainly lives in a special cottage.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Describing friendship in terms of snow and extending it to the warmth of a featherbed is unique. If one is surrounded by caring friends one certainly lives in a special cottage.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you persevere, for your very kind reflections in this review. Your words are sincerely appreciated and I promise to now PERSEVERE, to keep up the good work for you. Don't be a stranger! Blessings: Vance
Comment from MaggieF
I got that warm cosy feeling when I read your poem! I grew up in rural Ireland, no electricity and no neighbours so I love walking by houses (real ones) with their lights on and the family together inside, warm and cosy. I loved 'Your featherbed of love'. Friendship is a wonderful thing and should be cherished.MaggieF
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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I got that warm cosy feeling when I read your poem! I grew up in rural Ireland, no electricity and no neighbours so I love walking by houses (real ones) with their lights on and the family together inside, warm and cosy. I loved 'Your featherbed of love'. Friendship is a wonderful thing and should be cherished.MaggieF
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thank you Maggie and I'm really delighted that you got a cozy feeling when reading this as that is exactly what I was aiming for! I sincerely appreciate your kind words and stars and hope to see you again soon! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
