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From out of the Grayness

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Reaching from the gray areas to understand life

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Comment from royowen
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There has been a rush of philosophical thought in the poetry this morning Vance, and this adds to it. Yes it's why the prophet prophesies, the doctor heals, the novelist novels, and the poet writes, God provides, compels the artist. Not everybody listens properly, but that's what sets us apart. Well done, my friend, beautifully thoughtfful words, that compels me to define these things myself, blessings, thanks for sharing, Roy

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
    Thanks Roy, much appreciated. Vance
reply by royowen on 31-Mar-2017
    Most welcome
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
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Nice artwork. This is, by far, one of the greatest poems I've read. Very well-written piece. Thanks for sharing it with us. Good luck with future writings!
Nicole

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much Nikki! I really appreciate this great review and stars and will do my best to keep your interest...also I will come around and visit your works as well! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from MaggieF
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Have you had a baby? All that's missing from this poem is the screaming and cursing! I love the idea of giving birth to music. I love 'fair or ugly' when we give birth we love the child unconditionally. Enjoyed the birth of this poem. MaggieF

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
    Thanks so much Maggie. I appreciate your fine review and will try to keep you delighted! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Excellent. This is a clever and interesting writing. I like the comparison of birth to writing. It is well written and flows in a nice manner. I enjoyed the poem.

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
    Thanks so much prettybluebirds! I appreciate your comments and stars...don't be a stranger! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem describing the process of how to take the first step and follow through from there to the end of the process to produce a poem of love.

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 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
    Sandra, I really appreciate your lovely review and hope to see you again soon! HIS GRAYNESS ..Vance