From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "The Hum"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from bertranclan
Excellent use of metaphor and personification. So many poems here lack that. Your imagery is spot-on..."word music". I love it! I love the whole thing. Kudos to you!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Excellent use of metaphor and personification. So many poems here lack that. Your imagery is spot-on..."word music". I love it! I love the whole thing. Kudos to you!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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I'm glad to meet you and remind me of my dear friend in High School : Allison Bertrand! just you are part of the clan! Sorry for the diversion and thanks so much for your really appreciated review! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Dean Kuch
Does the sight of birth inspire the poet, or has the poet birthed a new poem after having been inspired?
Food for thought, but I would tend to lean towards both scenarios myself.
Inspiration can be gleaned from the most unlikeliest of places such as antediluvian cemeteries, or musky catacombs beneath the vaunted streets of Rome.
And, probably most inspiring of all, the delivery room of a hospital's maternity ward.
Bravo, Vance; very well done.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Does the sight of birth inspire the poet, or has the poet birthed a new poem after having been inspired?
Food for thought, but I would tend to lean towards both scenarios myself.
Inspiration can be gleaned from the most unlikeliest of places such as antediluvian cemeteries, or musky catacombs beneath the vaunted streets of Rome.
And, probably most inspiring of all, the delivery room of a hospital's maternity ward.
Bravo, Vance; very well done.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Thanks Dean for this very GLORIUS AND EXCITING AND HIGHLY AUTOMATED REVIEW! I'm truly honored and delighted! Vance
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My pleasure, Vance.
Take care, my friend.
~Dean
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Thank you so much Dean and NOTE, you have presented absolutely! The most magnificent Review ever to light the screen on FANSTORY'! Vance
Comment from doggymad
This is the first time I have had the privilege of reviewing one of your works.
An absolutely wonderful poem that follows the process from the tiniest seed on an idea to the birth of the finished product.
It is obvious reading this that you have a genuine love of words and creating masterpieces with them
love and hugs
Freda, Podge and Rodge.
Say hi to Bitsy
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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This is the first time I have had the privilege of reviewing one of your works.
An absolutely wonderful poem that follows the process from the tiniest seed on an idea to the birth of the finished product.
It is obvious reading this that you have a genuine love of words and creating masterpieces with them
love and hugs
Freda, Podge and Rodge.
Say hi to Bitsy
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Ruff Ruff and big smiles back to Podge and Rodge and big Hugs and Blessings back to you Freda, dear one! Vance
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This was a fascinating read and a wonderful journey of the hand and mind of a scribe.
Some memorable lines from a creative mind.
Have a great evening
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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This was a fascinating read and a wonderful journey of the hand and mind of a scribe.
Some memorable lines from a creative mind.
Have a great evening
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Wow YNWA, HOW GREAT TO MEET YOU INSIDE A WONDERFUL REVIEW! I'll promise to keep in touch, thanks so much! Vance
Comment from Janet Foor
Truly, the mind demands a poem. A clever and creative poem to capture the birth of thought as it captures the poet.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Truly, the mind demands a poem. A clever and creative poem to capture the birth of thought as it captures the poet.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Thank you sincerely Janet for this lovely review and also the opportunity to meet you! I Shall be coming around to visit your works as well. Blessings! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A mind spilling onto the page here and oozing all those inner thoughts to form an abstract painting in words, best wishes Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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A mind spilling onto the page here and oozing all those inner thoughts to form an abstract painting in words, best wishes Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Thanks Dolly....ya made me Jolly....Hmmm. excuse me....couldn't help that tasty opportunity but sincere thanks anyway ALL DAY, EVERYDAY! HIS GRAYNESS....Vance
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem uses biology and birth terms as metaphors for writing process from idea to finished product. It also gives the reason why we write.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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This poem uses biology and birth terms as metaphors for writing process from idea to finished product. It also gives the reason why we write.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Thanks so much dragonpoet for "dragon those fine thoughts and words over here to HIS GRAYNESS (Vance) who sincerely appreciates your fine review.
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You're welcome, Vance. I like the pun.
Joan
Comment from MissMerri
I love this poem! I can easily relate to the "pangs of birth" as a new poem comes into the world. What a beautiful way you have described this process. I especially loved this stanza... because a beautifully created poem is truly "word music."
"The impatient tapping
Of the Conductor's Baton
Demands response to the call
For word music
But... the whole poem is amazing and I loved every word of it. Thanks for making my day!
MM
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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I love this poem! I can easily relate to the "pangs of birth" as a new poem comes into the world. What a beautiful way you have described this process. I especially loved this stanza... because a beautifully created poem is truly "word music."
"The impatient tapping
Of the Conductor's Baton
Demands response to the call
For word music
But... the whole poem is amazing and I loved every word of it. Thanks for making my day!
MM
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Thank you so very much for this lovely review and know that I am truly Honored to receive such an honor from such a very splendid and exceptional talent as you! Hugs and blessings, dear one! Vance
Comment from apky
I'm just about speechless, His Grayness.
You caught it all superbly. I've been here for almost 2 months but I think this one deserves my very first six.
I feel like this is a tribute to writers.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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I'm just about speechless, His Grayness.
You caught it all superbly. I've been here for almost 2 months but I think this one deserves my very first six.
I feel like this is a tribute to writers.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Wow apky, thank you so very much and what a delight to meet you with such a wonderful introduction. I shall come around soon and visit your works as well. Blessings! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells about state of mind, love of words and creation and mentions subtly how the process of creation of thoughts manifests and gives birth of poems or songs painted in words I can relate to; this is an exceptional work on graphical portrayal (visual imagery) of the worlds where poets create poems. 6-star
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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This tells about state of mind, love of words and creation and mentions subtly how the process of creation of thoughts manifests and gives birth of poems or songs painted in words I can relate to; this is an exceptional work on graphical portrayal (visual imagery) of the worlds where poets create poems. 6-star
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Wow! What a genuine delight to meet you and read your lovely review, so very much appreciated! I will be coming around to visit your works too and get to know you better! Blessings! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
