From out of the Grayness
Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "The Hum"Reaching from the gray areas to understand life
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Comment from Liberty Justice
Oh, my, HisGrayness, you have an eloquent way with words the way you described the expectant and preparations for birth of a child. Such elaboration with lines flowing into a wait for bundle of joy. Please check out my writings and pass my books in my profile and website links on to everyone. thanks liberty justice
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Oh, my, HisGrayness, you have an eloquent way with words the way you described the expectant and preparations for birth of a child. Such elaboration with lines flowing into a wait for bundle of joy. Please check out my writings and pass my books in my profile and website links on to everyone. thanks liberty justice
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Liberty Justice, for such a delightful and uplifting review. I honored! Vance
Comment from RGstar
SEVEN STAR RATING
This is absolutely brilliant. Metaphors in abundance. Character, underlined meanings, and purpose takes no second stage.
We feel the importance of what is said here, for it is the emphasis on life and parts which are explained intricately.
Such beautiful wording, where something unsaid is said. This is the way poetry excels. The unsaid, said.
I can't tell you how much I liked this. I pray we see this in the poem of the month next month. It would have my vote hands down. An unusual and strong write. So sad not have the right number of stars for this one.
Bravo, Vance, bravo.
RG
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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SEVEN STAR RATING
This is absolutely brilliant. Metaphors in abundance. Character, underlined meanings, and purpose takes no second stage.
We feel the importance of what is said here, for it is the emphasis on life and parts which are explained intricately.
Such beautiful wording, where something unsaid is said. This is the way poetry excels. The unsaid, said.
I can't tell you how much I liked this. I pray we see this in the poem of the month next month. It would have my vote hands down. An unusual and strong write. So sad not have the right number of stars for this one.
Bravo, Vance, bravo.
RG
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you RGstar for this uplifting and generous review! I hope to be able to bring more on this subject to inspire FS Folks! Vance
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a wonderful poem about the joys a new life can bring.
These are my favorite lines:
The scribbled gift
Is gently laid
Into the hands
Of humanity
Very well done, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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This is a wonderful poem about the joys a new life can bring.
These are my favorite lines:
The scribbled gift
Is gently laid
Into the hands
Of humanity
Very well done, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Debbie for this wonderful review...Vance
Comment from kahpot
Well, you have certainly stimulated me and my thoughts on being creative, I have a few thoughts on this read and I am staying with the birth and delivery thought, although the last lines tempt me to think birth of a write, in any way, this has intrigued me and I will read this many more times and learn from this poem many thanks****kahpot
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Well, you have certainly stimulated me and my thoughts on being creative, I have a few thoughts on this read and I am staying with the birth and delivery thought, although the last lines tempt me to think birth of a write, in any way, this has intrigued me and I will read this many more times and learn from this poem many thanks****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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THhanks so much kahpot, for your very kind and generous review. Glad you liked this and hope to see you often! Vance
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a very interesting and profound write, on the creation of a poem, Vance. I admit, I had to go back and read it again before I grasped the concept, lol, then it was all clear:)) nicely done, ny friend. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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This is a very interesting and profound write, on the creation of a poem, Vance. I admit, I had to go back and read it again before I grasped the concept, lol, then it was all clear:)) nicely done, ny friend. ~Kerry
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Thank you Kerry for this lovely review and generous stars! So wonderful to hear from you! Vance
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Your very welcome:)
Comment from DonandVicki
I like the thought pattern you put into your work. The birth of a poem, A very interesting way of putting the inspiration that we all experience. I have had some VERY difficult deliveries lately.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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I like the thought pattern you put into your work. The birth of a poem, A very interesting way of putting the inspiration that we all experience. I have had some VERY difficult deliveries lately.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Thank you Donald and Vicki for this lovely review and stars! It is much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, Vance, I don't think I've ever read a more passionate poem about the art of writing poetry... I think you should have saved this one for a contest about the same! VERY well done, IMHO - exceptional!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Wow, Vance, I don't think I've ever read a more passionate poem about the art of writing poetry... I think you should have saved this one for a contest about the same! VERY well done, IMHO - exceptional!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Thanks Dawn, always a delight to hear from you and I appreciate the stars too! Vance
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A well penned poem, Vance.
-I like how you describe the "birth of poetry."
-You take us step by step through all kinds
of emotions.
-I like the stanza about the "word music."
-The result of the poem is nicely presented
in the concluding three stanzas, with the
result being some form of love.
-Thanks for sharing this interesting concept of poetry.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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-A well penned poem, Vance.
-I like how you describe the "birth of poetry."
-You take us step by step through all kinds
of emotions.
-I like the stanza about the "word music."
-The result of the poem is nicely presented
in the concluding three stanzas, with the
result being some form of love.
-Thanks for sharing this interesting concept of poetry.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Thank you Pam for this lovely review and stars. They are sincerely appreciated! Vance
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You are very welcome and deserving, Vance.
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Vance I have read this several times to grasp the concepts and context and you describe the birth of a poem in a most unusual way however your descriptions are so spot on and makes for a good read. i did enjoy this Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Hi Vance I have read this several times to grasp the concepts and context and you describe the birth of a poem in a most unusual way however your descriptions are so spot on and makes for a good read. i did enjoy this Cheers Christine
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Thanks so much Chrissy, for this great review and stars! Wonderful to hear from you and hope to see you again soon! Vance
Comment from honeytree
The art work is excellent
Within our daily lives
we have our good times
our sad times and yes bad times.
Life is like a movie really
we can be sad one minute
laughing the next minute
love might arrive.
Honey tree
I have no six left
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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The art work is excellent
Within our daily lives
we have our good times
our sad times and yes bad times.
Life is like a movie really
we can be sad one minute
laughing the next minute
love might arrive.
Honey tree
I have no six left
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Thanks honeytree ......Much appreciated and don't be a stranger!! Vance
