Ads God Might Have Written Today
Two full-page ads for Heaven and Hell rental apartments2 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
Your ads are written well. After all, they do come directly from God, right? Each ad is tailor made for its location. The writing is done well, but the print is really tiny.
Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest,
A nit: 'don't expect any (help) from denizens,'
~patty~
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Your ads are written well. After all, they do come directly from God, right? Each ad is tailor made for its location. The writing is done well, but the print is really tiny.
Thank you for sharing, and good luck in the contest,
A nit: 'don't expect any (help) from denizens,'
~patty~
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Thanks for your terrific review and heads-up, Patty! I Hope I enlarged the type size enough, snd wish I had done it sooner, because the squinting might have cost the piece some votes.
Don
Comment from essence56
This was really good. You gave all the requirments just as requested. I loved your descriptions of each. And there was no need to even say the destinations, because a vision had been painted in your descriptions for us to see. Very well done. On, and I loved this is where people always told you where to go.. Very Very GOOD..
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This was really good. You gave all the requirments just as requested. I loved your descriptions of each. And there was no need to even say the destinations, because a vision had been painted in your descriptions for us to see. Very well done. On, and I loved this is where people always told you where to go.. Very Very GOOD..
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
