When One Life Changes
Friendship Has To Change19 total reviews
Comment from MelB
Hi LoannaLois, so sorry for your loss! So many losses, especially close together can be tough. Some friends are just for a season and others last a lifetime.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Hi LoannaLois, so sorry for your loss! So many losses, especially close together can be tough. Some friends are just for a season and others last a lifetime.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Blessings and thanks, mel.😘
Comment from Spitfire
Good entry of two women bonding over tragedies. This bond is threatened when one finds a man whose love will override her need for a close friend. Definitely, the one left behind will be challenged.
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Good entry of two women bonding over tragedies. This bond is threatened when one finds a man whose love will override her need for a close friend. Definitely, the one left behind will be challenged.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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What s lovely and kind response. Thank you!
Comment from rockinm76233
Wonderful story of friendship and survival, moving on but still keeping the things that were and are precious to you both. Your bonds of friendship have endured the trials of time.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Wonderful story of friendship and survival, moving on but still keeping the things that were and are precious to you both. Your bonds of friendship have endured the trials of time.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Thank you thank you for the understsnding words! I truly appreciate every comment.
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Your welcome.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is a very goo contest entry. contests are hard to win. So much rides on the reader's frame of mind as they read your work.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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This is a very goo contest entry. contests are hard to win. So much rides on the reader's frame of mind as they read your work.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Very true, Thomas, but we just keep trying don't we🤗
Comment from ParkersPath
What a cool story! Thanks for sharing it with us. "Whole Again" -- I love it! I haven't faced death quite so acutely as you have, but I know it is coming soon. Thank you for helping me prepare for it. I hope your life will soon take a similar turn as your friend!
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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What a cool story! Thanks for sharing it with us. "Whole Again" -- I love it! I haven't faced death quite so acutely as you have, but I know it is coming soon. Thank you for helping me prepare for it. I hope your life will soon take a similar turn as your friend!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Bless your heart your comments showed true understanding. God bless you
Comment from emptypage
So....is this fiction, or non-fiction? I'm confused. If it is your friends and this is true--does it qualify for a flash fiction contest?
The information is interesting and makes a good point, but there is no real story to it. This is more like a blog entry.
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So....is this fiction, or non-fiction? I'm confused. If it is your friends and this is true--does it qualify for a flash fiction contest?
The information is interesting and makes a good point, but there is no real story to it. This is more like a blog entry.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Actually, it is a fictional take on a true friendship. I have taken many true stories and adapted details. Could you clarify "no story" for me? I was always taught that every thought is a story....I appreciate your helpful comments.
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A story has a beginning, a middle, and an end. A thought. The weather is nice today. Can be expressed in a sentence.
A story has a place where you purposely end up. It is an anecdotal piece, with narration or without, with dialogue or without, but whereby you craft a. Ere thought into a fascinating, gory, humorous, strange, touching or adventurous happening. Characters stand out, usually the main two, and some kind of literary conflict occurs and is resolved.
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You are so thoughtful and helpful. I am going to save your words for the future. I thank you so very much. Lois
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
This was good. It reminds the reader not to take friendship for granted. I think friendship should be cherished. This would be great for a more lengthy material. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck on future writings!
Nicole
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This was good. It reminds the reader not to take friendship for granted. I think friendship should be cherished. This would be great for a more lengthy material. Thank you for sharing it with us. Good luck on future writings!
Nicole
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Bless your comments.You show such insight
Thanks !
Comment from LilyLa
Your story is a beautiful testament to the value of true friendship. I was moved by the emotion, but heartened as well.
LilyLa
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Your story is a beautiful testament to the value of true friendship. I was moved by the emotion, but heartened as well.
LilyLa
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2017
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Blessings to you, and thanks so much!
Comment from Mustang Patty
Thank you for sharing this story about life, love, and loss. Yes, when circumstances change, sometimes everyone around the person finds their lives changing, too. All we can do is wish that everyone will be happy,
~patty~
Good luck in the contest. You did a great job in expressing so much in just a few paragraphs.
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Thank you for sharing this story about life, love, and loss. Yes, when circumstances change, sometimes everyone around the person finds their lives changing, too. All we can do is wish that everyone will be happy,
~patty~
Good luck in the contest. You did a great job in expressing so much in just a few paragraphs.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
