My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Harry Chapin"a collection of my poetry
97 total reviews
Comment from DR DIP
Nice Bio Poem on Harry Chapin. I loved the song Cat's in the cradle it has A WONDERFUL MESSAGE. I wasn't aware of all the things he did as shown in a biography of his life I did not realize he was a poet though it didn't surprise me.
thanks for sharing this lovely tribute poem.
dip
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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Nice Bio Poem on Harry Chapin. I loved the song Cat's in the cradle it has A WONDERFUL MESSAGE. I wasn't aware of all the things he did as shown in a biography of his life I did not realize he was a poet though it didn't surprise me.
thanks for sharing this lovely tribute poem.
dip
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely tribute poem to Harry Chapin. He sounds like he lived his life well and through your poem and interesting author's notes we that read it will get to know him just a little. Nicely done and good luck in the contest.
cheers.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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This is a lovely tribute poem to Harry Chapin. He sounds like he lived his life well and through your poem and interesting author's notes we that read it will get to know him just a little. Nicely done and good luck in the contest.
cheers.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful tribute to your own idol and influence dear anonymous! i see why you wrote about him, rarely you find such a warm heart.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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this is a beautiful tribute to your own idol and influence dear anonymous! i see why you wrote about him, rarely you find such a warm heart.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from sandy montgomery
I found your work heart felt and deeply sincere. I could feel your admiration for this man through your words. Your authors notes were very well done and added much to your presentation. I believe he would be honored by your work. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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I found your work heart felt and deeply sincere. I could feel your admiration for this man through your words. Your authors notes were very well done and added much to your presentation. I believe he would be honored by your work. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from kathleenspalding
Very nice poem flows well and is a great tribute to Harry Chapin. I've always loved his songs, too. Your poem flows well and tells an impressive story. I appreciate the interesting author's notes. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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Very nice poem flows well and is a great tribute to Harry Chapin. I've always loved his songs, too. Your poem flows well and tells an impressive story. I appreciate the interesting author's notes. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
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You're welcome
Comment from DonandVicki
A very fine tribute to an infamous writer/ singer. I enjoyed reading your authors notes as much as I enjoyed reading your very well constructed poem. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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A very fine tribute to an infamous writer/ singer. I enjoyed reading your authors notes as much as I enjoyed reading your very well constructed poem. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from Thal1959
Hello. I am the one who created this contest. This is the sort of thing I was looking for. My poem focused on the individual. You did more by relating how the person you wrote of affected you personally. Very well done.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Hello. I am the one who created this contest. This is the sort of thing I was looking for. My poem focused on the individual. You did more by relating how the person you wrote of affected you personally. Very well done.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments - I'm glad I gave you what you were hoping for
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Good luck on the contest.
Comment from Dan-C
I am a big fan of Harry. I loved the way he could craft a song. He was taken way too soon.
I like your poem and the way the rhyme sings.
Thank you for sharing.
Good luck
Dan
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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I am a big fan of Harry. I loved the way he could craft a song. He was taken way too soon.
I like your poem and the way the rhyme sings.
Thank you for sharing.
Good luck
Dan
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from Selina Stambi
The author notes are great - they validate the 'authentic' sincerity in the free verse lines.
A great tribute to someone who's so evidently touched your life.
Hope you've had a good week. Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
The great (storyteller)
Though('... this apostrophe is not required) I know I've played it
But the (e)ffect was profound
So (comma not required here) I took my flight like a bird
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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The author notes are great - they validate the 'authentic' sincerity in the free verse lines.
A great tribute to someone who's so evidently touched your life.
Hope you've had a good week. Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
The great (storyteller)
Though('... this apostrophe is not required) I know I've played it
But the (e)ffect was profound
So (comma not required here) I took my flight like a bird
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed your hommage to a great man here. I have to admit I hadn't heard of him, but I'm always interested in finding out about people like this so I really appreciated the notes too. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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I enjoyed your hommage to a great man here. I have to admit I hadn't heard of him, but I'm always interested in finding out about people like this so I really appreciated the notes too. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
