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Comment from tfawcus
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Yes, up with the birds and tweeting away with the best of them. Some don't much like his song, but he takes every opportunity to sing it. As you say, not a slacker.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    Since we all have to pull together it would be nice to all get along. Nobody likes the other person's choices, but it's the nature of the government--your turn, my turn, your turn--you get the idea. He's smart, he'll figure it out.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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I agree. he has accomplished so much it's astounding and will do more. A very good contest entry. I hope you do well. It is hard to win contests. The writing is so arbitrary. It takes skill and some luck.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    Hi Tom. Everybody needs a chance. Sixty days is nothing. He's smart. He will figure it out. Our country has to learn to get along with each other's choice. We can't always have our own way. Thank you for your review and you're so right--a 5-7-5 is too short to make much of a statement.
Comment from pome lover
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good for you! and you're right. Hopefully his detractors will realize it when the economy picks up and taxes go down. But they're too busy being destructive.
Every word in your poem is forceful and important and true- worded simply - perfect analysis.
pome lover

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    Thank you very much for your supportive review. He needs some time. Sixty days is nothing. But those who don't like him won't like him no matter what he does, so he might as well due what he was elected to do. He's smart. He'll figure it out.
reply by pome lover on 29-Mar-2017
    I agree
Comment from RodG
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I doubt anyone really thinks Trump is lazy; in fact, he seems to be tireless. But WHAT is he paying attention to? Your ambiguous reference leaves to much to the reader's imagination.

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 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    Thank you, Rod, for your review--I think.
    I always regret entering these contests because people don't want the opposing viewpoint candidate in power to be there in the first place, let alone give them any credit. It all depends on what side of the fence a person is on. Too many politicians want the job of president, but are not capable, able, willing, or interested in doing much. Trump is the opposite. He is a hand's on guy--love him or hate him--at least he's on the job working. Whether or not he can accomplish anything with dug-in-the trenches opposition will remain to be seen.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Thank you for sharing this 5-7-5 about the Donald. Your piece fits the poetic form, and tells a tale within the words. This is a good entry for the contest. Good luck!
~patty~

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 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
    Thank you, Patty.