betwixt tweets 'n' deals
5/7/5 Trump's 60 days23 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
betwixt tweets 'n' deals
fake news or flights of fancy
Donald's dizzy days
Excellent commentary on Donald's first 100 days. We are all a little dizzy today but I'm sure he is.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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betwixt tweets 'n' deals
fake news or flights of fancy
Donald's dizzy days
Excellent commentary on Donald's first 100 days. We are all a little dizzy today but I'm sure he is.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello zanya, Very good, very cute. I usually don't review anything political unless it is lighthearted, and your poem is just that. I especially liked:
fake news or flights of fancy
(I truly laughed and thought ...
flights of fantasy -- except for the required syllable count that thought would also be funny.)
Also:
Donald's dizzy days
(and ... Donald's dark days to come. z, Donald only begun to get a sampling taste of Washington.)
A fun poem. Great complementary artwork choice. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Hello zanya, Very good, very cute. I usually don't review anything political unless it is lighthearted, and your poem is just that. I especially liked:
fake news or flights of fancy
(I truly laughed and thought ...
flights of fantasy -- except for the required syllable count that thought would also be funny.)
Also:
Donald's dizzy days
(and ... Donald's dark days to come. z, Donald only begun to get a sampling taste of Washington.)
A fun poem. Great complementary artwork choice. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Ogden
An excellent contest entry. Your opinion of President Donald Trump is expressed in a humorous way, with the help of some excellent alliteration.
Don
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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An excellent contest entry. Your opinion of President Donald Trump is expressed in a humorous way, with the help of some excellent alliteration.
Don
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Great review zanya
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
A really interesting and clever way of writing about 'The Donald' and his 'special ways'. He is to my mind, visibly a monster, rich or poor I have never liked him, he is sleazy and a liar. But aren't all politicians? Very well done kindest regards, Meia x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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A really interesting and clever way of writing about 'The Donald' and his 'special ways'. He is to my mind, visibly a monster, rich or poor I have never liked him, he is sleazy and a liar. But aren't all politicians? Very well done kindest regards, Meia x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Strange times we 're living in !! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
This is a great little 5-7-5 on the exploits of this first 60 days in office. I liked how you brought the tweeting into the mix. We certainly have learned a lot about the man from the timing of his tweets, to the absurdity of many of them. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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This is a great little 5-7-5 on the exploits of this first 60 days in office. I liked how you brought the tweeting into the mix. We certainly have learned a lot about the man from the timing of his tweets, to the absurdity of many of them. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, you captured his start well. Especially those tweets of his. Thanks for sharing,good luck with the competition and have a great day!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Nice poem, you captured his start well. Especially those tweets of his. Thanks for sharing,good luck with the competition and have a great day!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem " Between tweets 'n' Deals" and also your choice of picture that suggests turmoil. You had all your lines and syllables correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 poem " Between tweets 'n' Deals" and also your choice of picture that suggests turmoil. You had all your lines and syllables correct.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love this and the last line is a real gem, he seems to be getting tied in knots, but I admire his tenacity, I wish you good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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I love this and the last line is a real gem, he seems to be getting tied in knots, but I admire his tenacity, I wish you good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from royowen
I never thought that somebody as someone used to getting his own way in business would be suited to politics, and it seems heading that way. Well done, well worded and a subtly presented 5/7/5, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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I never thought that somebody as someone used to getting his own way in business would be suited to politics, and it seems heading that way. Well done, well worded and a subtly presented 5/7/5, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
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Most welcome
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Oh, a President that tweets. Tweeting and Presidency should never be in the same sentence. Especially, at two and three in the morning like he likes to do. Late night tweets are again not a good combination. Great job
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Oh, a President that tweets. Tweeting and Presidency should never be in the same sentence. Especially, at two and three in the morning like he likes to do. Late night tweets are again not a good combination. Great job
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Indeed !! Thanks for reading zanya
