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5/7/5 Trump's 60 days

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Comment from estory
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I think this poem, in all its alliterative music, all the repetition of 't' and 'f' and 'd' sounds, captures the whirling effect of a politics that seems to spinning out of control. we don't even pay attention to what these people are saying anymore. they live in another world, so far removed from the lives of ordinary people that it is disrespectful of them to even talk about us. I think its time everyone realized that the democratic and republican parties are both so corrupt, so beholden to the goliath international megalith companies that run this world with their money, that they no longer offer a viable political means to govern. estory

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    Thanks for taking time to read and critique -always good to hear views zanya
Comment from artemis53
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Well done. I think this is going to be quite a ride. I remember in some campaign footage that he couldn't get out of the bus and knocked on the glass door. At first I thought it was odd but then realized that he probably never opened a door for himself in his life.

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    Interesting -thanks for reading zanya
Comment from ronnie k
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A great Trump picture, his coming with an exact plan and like a hurricane are such only confusion is presented, great Trump, chump, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    And thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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A very good entry. contests are difficult to win. I have entered one today. Hopefully, we will both do well. If not keep trying. It's not how many you win. It's how often you try.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    Yes indeed !! Life forces us sometimes to remain philosophical !!zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. It seems most people do like the tweets from president Trump, then they can measure the tweets straight from his mouth to the news networks who often mislead th public.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    Yes thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes Donald's dizzy days indeed my friend he certainly knows how to confuse and mislead people in my opinion well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
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I think this pretty much sums up Trumps first 60 days in office so well.
Tweets n deals
Flights of fancy
Dizzy days........love these phrases they paint such a great picture
Have a great day

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    Yes strange times !! zanya
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Dizzy is indeed what ALL of Donald Trump's days are, Anonymous Poet
Ya know, Twitter will be unveiling a new ad campaign for the Spring & Summer 2017 seasons, and I just happen to be privy to the rough draft.
They're calling it: "The Birdbrain Campaign".
Take a look, but keep it on the hush-hush, s-h-h-h-hhhhhhhhh...
I'm not supposed to be sharing this with anyone!

Twitters New Logo: The "Bird Brain Campaign" photo Trump_silhouette_rtr_img_zpsd4shoncg.jpg


It outta be a HUGE success.
Good luck to you in the contest, heh-heh-heh...
~Deano ;)

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    Ha Ha !! strange times ! Thanks for sharing views zanya
Comment from BeasPeas
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Good job with this. You've included what's going on without being offensive to either side. I like that. It shows ability to assess without being over the top. Marilyn

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    Thanks for that interesting review zanya
Comment from nuthead
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This is great. ha! You've incorporated a good many of his failings in so few words. ha! Tweets, deals, fake news feeder - indeed dizzying days.

Well done!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya