My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Has it really only been 60 days?"a collection of my poetry
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Comment from Chardae
This is pretty straight to the point. It tells it like it is though, and I like that. It's interesting how quickly an entire country can change because of one person.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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This is pretty straight to the point. It tells it like it is though, and I like that. It's interesting how quickly an entire country can change because of one person.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Well with so few words you have managed to get your message across. Your syllable count is perfect - the picture is good and suits your words. Not easy to get a message across with so few syllables but you have managed. Well done and good luck. Warm regards Dorothy
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Well with so few words you have managed to get your message across. Your syllable count is perfect - the picture is good and suits your words. Not easy to get a message across with so few syllables but you have managed. Well done and good luck. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from Halfree
A lot was said in this little posting gem. I think this caught the essence of the first days of Trump and his personal quirks. It brought to mind a Faulkner novel,The Sound and The Fury. Great title taken from literature...the Bard, "It is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing." Quote might be off a bit, but does capture a moment. So does this posting.
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A lot was said in this little posting gem. I think this caught the essence of the first days of Trump and his personal quirks. It brought to mind a Faulkner novel,The Sound and The Fury. Great title taken from literature...the Bard, "It is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing." Quote might be off a bit, but does capture a moment. So does this posting.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from humpwhistle
I wish it could stop him, but I'm not optimistic.
The man is an effective campaigner, but a lousy
governor.
I wonder how long it will take for his supporters
to admit their mistake. It's already been too long.
Buckle up.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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I wish it could stop him, but I'm not optimistic.
The man is an effective campaigner, but a lousy
governor.
I wonder how long it will take for his supporters
to admit their mistake. It's already been too long.
Buckle up.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from Rasmine
This is great! Yeah, the health care issue stopped him dead. That is great because it scared me to death. If they could develop a better system, then I'm for it, but I don't trust this administration to be able to do that.
Good luck in the contest!
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This is great! Yeah, the health care issue stopped him dead. That is great because it scared me to death. If they could develop a better system, then I'm for it, but I don't trust this administration to be able to do that.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from dragonpoet
A president shouldn't have such a face. He looks like a kid having a tantrum.
He sure did roar but it got him nowhere. You got his first three months recapped in 17 syllables.
Good luck.
Keep writing.
dp
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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A president shouldn't have such a face. He looks like a kid having a tantrum.
He sure did roar but it got him nowhere. You got his first three months recapped in 17 syllables.
Good luck.
Keep writing.
dp
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
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No problem.
dp
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, i love your write. One can write a great deal on it. But Let us admit one thing, he is the President and he has the executive power to do anything. Besides he is a politician. I have never trusted a politician. He could be a lion but at sometimes even a lion becomes toothless. As a politician his dream is to destroy Obamas heritage. Well he can try. To succeed depends on the people.
Danhy Jock
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Hi friend, i love your write. One can write a great deal on it. But Let us admit one thing, he is the President and he has the executive power to do anything. Besides he is a politician. I have never trusted a politician. He could be a lion but at sometimes even a lion becomes toothless. As a politician his dream is to destroy Obamas heritage. Well he can try. To succeed depends on the people.
Danhy Jock
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from rjuselius
indeed, trump in office has screwed up pretty much everything dear anonymous! i like your clever little piece of poetry, it's a fine social commentary.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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indeed, trump in office has screwed up pretty much everything dear anonymous! i like your clever little piece of poetry, it's a fine social commentary.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from Hitcher
I believe he thinks he's a Lion, or at least started off as a lion, but he has lost a couple of claws and the odd tooth thus far, we will see if he has the POWER to grow them back and ROAR again... A Very Good contest entry. Good luck !
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I believe he thinks he's a Lion, or at least started off as a lion, but he has lost a couple of claws and the odd tooth thus far, we will see if he has the POWER to grow them back and ROAR again... A Very Good contest entry. Good luck !
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
Comment from antonieta
very good. Your poem is short but straightforward. Oh, Donald Trump. he is far from being popular in Europe, so you know.
Antonieta
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very good. Your poem is short but straightforward. Oh, Donald Trump. he is far from being popular in Europe, so you know.
Antonieta
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review
