My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Has it really only been 60 days?"a collection of my poetry
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write and I remember the campaign when health care came up and he wanted total reform when Hilary said it just neede tweeking! What a dilemma! I love the description, lion roared as he looks a bit like a lion and he might be eating his words now! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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A poignant write and I remember the campaign when health care came up and he wanted total reform when Hilary said it just neede tweeking! What a dilemma! I love the description, lion roared as he looks a bit like a lion and he might be eating his words now! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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thank you for your encouraging review
Comment from royowen
I love this entry in this trump 5/7/5 poetry contest entry, very humorous. Yes indeed, it seems that all the bluster in the world won't get what you want, if the mechanics of politics stops you! Well done, great entry in this contest, blessings, Roy
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I love this entry in this trump 5/7/5 poetry contest entry, very humorous. Yes indeed, it seems that all the bluster in the world won't get what you want, if the mechanics of politics stops you! Well done, great entry in this contest, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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thank you for your encouraging review
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Most welcome
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
He certainly has made his presence known, felt and heard. I doubt there has ever been a president like him and never will be again. If it's only been 60 days, what will it be like after four years? Well written 5-7-5 contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra x
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He certainly has made his presence known, felt and heard. I doubt there has ever been a president like him and never will be again. If it's only been 60 days, what will it be like after four years? Well written 5-7-5 contest entry. Good luck! :) Sandra x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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Comment from Eternal Muse
Wow! What a face.. It says it all (lol). Excellent satire on the one who promised so much and delivered little.
Very witty and on point. I wish you luck in the contest, with this entry you won't need it.
Love, Y.
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Wow! What a face.. It says it all (lol). Excellent satire on the one who promised so much and delivered little.
Very witty and on point. I wish you luck in the contest, with this entry you won't need it.
Love, Y.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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Comment from tfawcus
'Dead' seems rather an appropriate word in the circumstances. Lions need rather more than words, if they are to get their way. This one seems to be up against an establishment much more effective than the iron bars of a cage.
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'Dead' seems rather an appropriate word in the circumstances. Lions need rather more than words, if they are to get their way. This one seems to be up against an establishment much more effective than the iron bars of a cage.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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thank you for your encouraging review
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very interesting contest. I like what you did with it. Your contest entry should do very well. You make a very valid point. I can't wait to read the other entries. I wish you the best of luck.
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This is a very interesting contest. I like what you did with it. Your contest entry should do very well. You make a very valid point. I can't wait to read the other entries. I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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thank you for your encouraging review
Comment from moonsunrise
The imagery you selected reveals so much! Has it only been 60 days? His health care has been bill nixed. What will happen next? We shall wait and see?
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards.
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The imagery you selected reveals so much! Has it only been 60 days? His health care has been bill nixed. What will happen next? We shall wait and see?
Thanks for sharing.
Kind regards.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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thank you for your encouraging review
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Your very welcome.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Looking at that Ghastly beast makes me sick to my stomach. I am afraid I never liked 'The Donald', president or not, rich or (comparatively) poor. You have done a great job in showing your feelings towards him here, a very clever wordplay well done this is truly excellent.
Kindest regards Meia x
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Looking at that Ghastly beast makes me sick to my stomach. I am afraid I never liked 'The Donald', president or not, rich or (comparatively) poor. You have done a great job in showing your feelings towards him here, a very clever wordplay well done this is truly excellent.
Kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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Comment from MLEaton
A really good 5-7-5 poem. I love the imagery of "a lion roared in" and 'Executive orders flew" all to be brought to an abrupt end! Delicious writing. Thank you!
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A really good 5-7-5 poem. I love the imagery of "a lion roared in" and 'Executive orders flew" all to be brought to an abrupt end! Delicious writing. Thank you!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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thank you for your encouraging review
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My pleasure. M :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging review
