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Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, sorry I am so late to read your story...I fell and have a concussion...it is better but I still get headaches....sometimes things that happen in our lives turn out to save us...we may not think so at the time...but it is for the best...thank you so much for sharing your story my sweet friend...very well written....I hope you are doing well....so good to see you...love ya Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, sorry I am so late to read your story...I fell and have a concussion...it is better but I still get headaches....sometimes things that happen in our lives turn out to save us...we may not think so at the time...but it is for the best...thank you so much for sharing your story my sweet friend...very well written....I hope you are doing well....so good to see you...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
Comment from Lu Saluna
A fascinating story. Who would have thought a "kidnapping" would have been a favour. Your script was very well written. It was very easy to follow. I enjoyed it very much. The details were clear and concise. It was all very easy to envision while reading along.
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A fascinating story. Who would have thought a "kidnapping" would have been a favour. Your script was very well written. It was very easy to follow. I enjoyed it very much. The details were clear and concise. It was all very easy to envision while reading along.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
Your story is well told. I liked the way that the voice of 'older' Michael filled us in on what happened. This was certainly a change in your life. Thank you for sharing this,
~patty~
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Your story is well told. I liked the way that the voice of 'older' Michael filled us in on what happened. This was certainly a change in your life. Thank you for sharing this,
~patty~
Comment Written 29-Mar-2017
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Well done, Mikey. This is fascinating and so well told. I like the way you fade the characters out and back in again, from the little child Michael to the older person Michael. It gives great perspective to the story, I thought, Giddy
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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Well done, Mikey. This is fascinating and so well told. I like the way you fade the characters out and back in again, from the little child Michael to the older person Michael. It gives great perspective to the story, I thought, Giddy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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Hi, Giddy
I best answer something and let you know I DO read your wonderful reviews and they delight me. WOW. I'm over the moon with this one. I LOVE your plays so this is a big confidence boost. It sure is a different form of writing, yes.
Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from Pearl Edwards
So mikey that's where your very creative thinking comes from, it began with your strange reactions as a little tacker to be called a girl. Loved reading about your start in life. It's really amazing, my life seems so ordinary compared to some.
Thanks for your thoughts too, Cyclone Debbie slipped south of us and is now battering the coast down there.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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So mikey that's where your very creative thinking comes from, it began with your strange reactions as a little tacker to be called a girl. Loved reading about your start in life. It's really amazing, my life seems so ordinary compared to some.
Thanks for your thoughts too, Cyclone Debbie slipped south of us and is now battering the coast down there.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I suppose that was a bit odd of me. LOL
I think whatever out life happens to be it all seems normal to us. I look back on things now and I realize it's all a bit strange. At the time it was all I knew as life, so it was normal life to me.
So pleased you survived unscathed. It sounded like quite the scare!
Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from Gloria ....
Terrific script, Mav. You have such a natural narrative voicing that makes all your writes seem intimate, as if we are right there inside your imagination and staring through your eyes.
An excellent script form, as it's easy to picture the movement.
Exceptional work as always.
Ange
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Terrific script, Mav. You have such a natural narrative voicing that makes all your writes seem intimate, as if we are right there inside your imagination and staring through your eyes.
An excellent script form, as it's easy to picture the movement.
Exceptional work as always.
Ange
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Wow, Ange, that is a great part of what I am hoping to hear. I think I can work on formatting and getting used to directions and all that if I feel like the voicing and characterization is coming across fairly well. You are so encouraging and sweet as can be. I believe I will continue to struggle along. Thanks so much.
Mav
Comment from Sasha
Great job with this challenge. I like that you presented it as a narrated script. I love your casual conversational style. This was very interesting and filled with lots of fun character descriptions. Nice work with this one. I hope you are feeling better.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Great job with this challenge. I like that you presented it as a narrated script. I love your casual conversational style. This was very interesting and filled with lots of fun character descriptions. Nice work with this one. I hope you are feeling better.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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A little better, yes, thank you. So pleased you enjoyed. I just happened to be over at your house reviewing your latest. Great minds. LOL
Great to hear from you. Thanks a million, mikey
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I guess sometimes getting kidnapped can be a good thing. At least in your case it was. I enjoyed reading. I wonder how many other 'kidnappings' turned out as good?
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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I guess sometimes getting kidnapped can be a good thing. At least in your case it was. I enjoyed reading. I wonder how many other 'kidnappings' turned out as good?
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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That's a good question. What a great topic. I'd love to read a series of stories about various experiences. I'm sure there are more like mine where it worked out well. I know there are others though that weren't as lucky. I'm so pleased you liked this one. I'm starting to feel a bit more comfortable with these darn things. It sure is a different animal altogether. Thanks so very much for your helpful reviews. :)) mikey
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
haha I thought I was in for a story of cats & dogs.
Michael,
You did a great job with the challenge. Your lines flowed well with great detail. There is no doubt the authenticity of your words. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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haha I thought I was in for a story of cats & dogs.
Michael,
You did a great job with the challenge. Your lines flowed well with great detail. There is no doubt the authenticity of your words. Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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Hi, Jan
Wow, what a great encouraging review. Sorry I haven't been around much. I'll try and get caught up and participate more. Been sick and busy and other stuff. I do read all my reviews though and try and read all the entries even though I'm lame about reviewing and responding. Your doing great work keeping things going. Thanks a million, mikey
Comment from robyn corum
Michael,
Wow. A very intimate and revealing look into your background. It's so personal and real that it surprised me a bit. I feel sorry for your old family that was left behind, but things always seem to work out, I guess. One note: 'thermos'
Thanks!
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Michael,
Wow. A very intimate and revealing look into your background. It's so personal and real that it surprised me a bit. I feel sorry for your old family that was left behind, but things always seem to work out, I guess. One note: 'thermos'
Thanks!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
