My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "My son, my friend"a collection of my poetry
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Comment from Poetic Friend
This is a very touching poem on behalf of your son. He is blessed to have a parent as yourself, who loves him deeply, writing a heartfelt poem in his honor.
You met the syllable count as outlined in the contest. Great usage of word economy. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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This is a very touching poem on behalf of your son. He is blessed to have a parent as yourself, who loves him deeply, writing a heartfelt poem in his honor.
You met the syllable count as outlined in the contest. Great usage of word economy. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from RGstar
You say it like it is. A lovely photo and a nice tribute, nicely incorporated within the rules of Senryu.
Good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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You say it like it is. A lovely photo and a nice tribute, nicely incorporated within the rules of Senryu.
Good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Oatmeal
You did a wonderful job with the challenge that was presented to you. Your feelings are expressed well. Short and sweet. Informative and enlightening. It was a pleasure to read. I wish you the best in the contest.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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You did a wonderful job with the challenge that was presented to you. Your feelings are expressed well. Short and sweet. Informative and enlightening. It was a pleasure to read. I wish you the best in the contest.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your lovely review.
Comment from Dean Kuch
It is a common belief these days that until a child is actually born, it is not yet a consciously developing human being. This belief is fallacious.
"When does the soul enter the body?" someone once asked a Master.
"At the moment of conception," he replied.
When the sperm and ovum unite, there is a flash of light in the astral world. Souls there that are ready to be reborn, if their vibration matches that of the flash of light, rush to get in. Sometimes two or more get in at the same time, and the woman has twins, triplets, or even more.
It is important, therefore, to come together physically with an uplifted consciousness. That flash generated in the astral world reflects the couple's state of consciousness, especially as they felt during the moment of physical union.
Lovely senryu.
Good luck to you.
~Dean
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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It is a common belief these days that until a child is actually born, it is not yet a consciously developing human being. This belief is fallacious.
"When does the soul enter the body?" someone once asked a Master.
"At the moment of conception," he replied.
When the sperm and ovum unite, there is a flash of light in the astral world. Souls there that are ready to be reborn, if their vibration matches that of the flash of light, rush to get in. Sometimes two or more get in at the same time, and the woman has twins, triplets, or even more.
It is important, therefore, to come together physically with an uplifted consciousness. That flash generated in the astral world reflects the couple's state of consciousness, especially as they felt during the moment of physical union.
Lovely senryu.
Good luck to you.
~Dean
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your lovely review and for backing me up that souls can be reborn. I do believe that some souls continue to travel through time bonded together. They may just be friends, or have a familial relationship. Sometimes they are female and sometimes they are male.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great tribute to your friendship and love for your son, a great contest entry, I wish you well with the competition, best regards, Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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A great tribute to your friendship and love for your son, a great contest entry, I wish you well with the competition, best regards, Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry. The picture is awesome. Good job on the style of the senryu. You have a super message included in so few words/syllables. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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This is a great contest entry. The picture is awesome. Good job on the style of the senryu. You have a super message included in so few words/syllables. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Janet Foor
This is an amazing senryu. A lovely dedication to your friend. Somber in tone and heartfelt imagery. Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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This is an amazing senryu. A lovely dedication to your friend. Somber in tone and heartfelt imagery. Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from valmay
So much said in so few words. To have a beloved son to praise is a gift to the soul. You have expressed this so well. Your son a part of you forever. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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So much said in so few words. To have a beloved son to praise is a gift to the soul. You have expressed this so well. Your son a part of you forever. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written senryu. A good relationship between parents and children is one of the most important rekationships, and when they can declare each other as good friends are wonderful.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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A very well-written senryu. A good relationship between parents and children is one of the most important rekationships, and when they can declare each other as good friends are wonderful.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind words
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
There is no gap in relation between father and his son, for reasons unknown, through the spell of time, as it appears, they feel so, their souls have flown and joined each other; crux of relationship, I liked.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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There is no gap in relation between father and his son, for reasons unknown, through the spell of time, as it appears, they feel so, their souls have flown and joined each other; crux of relationship, I liked.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind words
