My Book of Poems 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "My son, my friend"a collection of my poetry
72 total reviews
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
This is excellent use of the familiar prompt. nice job on following the form to create a heartfelt and complete poem. the contest win is well deserved. thank you for sharing and congratulations
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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This is excellent use of the familiar prompt. nice job on following the form to create a heartfelt and complete poem. the contest win is well deserved. thank you for sharing and congratulations
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. This poem was a true labor of love,
~patty~
Comment from frogbook
What a lovely tribute to this sweet looking young man. A heartfelt message and an obvious bond in this little gem, economic of words but generous on emotion.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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What a lovely tribute to this sweet looking young man. A heartfelt message and an obvious bond in this little gem, economic of words but generous on emotion.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review. This was a fun write. My son is a treasure I was given the pleasure to raise.
~patty~
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Dear friend, i like this write in its simplicity. But I am not sure I understand it rightly. Do I take it that both you and your son are not together ? I am sorry I do not quite get it. Please forgive.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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Dear friend, i like this write in its simplicity. But I am not sure I understand it rightly. Do I take it that both you and your son are not together ? I am sorry I do not quite get it. Please forgive.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for stopping by to read and review. The poem is about my belief that my son's and my souls have been entwined since time began. We are always together - sometimes he is the parent, or just a friend. Our souls are neither male or female - we have just been traveling together - always,,
~patty~
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Thank you so much for illuminating me.
Danny Jock
Comment from rjuselius
aaawww, such a sweet piece of poetry and a well deserved win dear patty! i love the sentimental side of your work, it brings together joy and sorrow.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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aaawww, such a sweet piece of poetry and a well deserved win dear patty! i love the sentimental side of your work, it brings together joy and sorrow.
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review. I am so thrilled I won - this was an entry from the heart.
~patty~
Comment from Hitcher
Nice !! They (our children) when they magically enter our lives are the missing piece of the puzzle, the world we lived in, were part of, is finally complete : ) I love my girls and our souls are joined for sure : ) Good luck, cool little poem !
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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Nice !! They (our children) when they magically enter our lives are the missing piece of the puzzle, the world we lived in, were part of, is finally complete : ) I love my girls and our souls are joined for sure : ) Good luck, cool little poem !
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review. I am so thrilled I won - this was an entry from the heart.
~patty~
Comment from oliver818
What a nice poem, it describes the mother-son relationship beautifully. Thanks for sharing, good luck with the competition and have a great day!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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What a nice poem, it describes the mother-son relationship beautifully. Thanks for sharing, good luck with the competition and have a great day!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review. I am so thrilled I won - this was an entry from the heart.
~patty~
Comment from chcbeck
A beautifully penned sentry which fits the prompt perfectly. We are not just joined by blood but by another level to. Just a joy to read thank you for sharing.and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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A beautifully penned sentry which fits the prompt perfectly. We are not just joined by blood but by another level to. Just a joy to read thank you for sharing.and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review. I am so thrilled I won - this was an entry from the heart.
~patty~
Comment from nuthead
This is so cool. "Through time our two souls have flown / For all time,"
I too believe I am connected to my husband, children and grandchildren on a deeper, spiritual, soul level.
"For all time, we're joined." Is such a beautiful realization.
A sweet photo. What a smile. :) .
What a gift to have your son as your best friend.
My beloved son
Through time our two souls have flown
For all time, we're joined
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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This is so cool. "Through time our two souls have flown / For all time,"
I too believe I am connected to my husband, children and grandchildren on a deeper, spiritual, soul level.
"For all time, we're joined." Is such a beautiful realization.
A sweet photo. What a smile. :) .
What a gift to have your son as your best friend.
My beloved son
Through time our two souls have flown
For all time, we're joined
Comment Written 28-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review. I am so thrilled I won - this was an entry from the heart.
~patty~
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a lovely tribute to the friendship between parent and son, a lifetime union, told lyrically and in simple and artful construction, in full compliance with the prompt...
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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In my opinion, a lovely tribute to the friendship between parent and son, a lifetime union, told lyrically and in simple and artful construction, in full compliance with the prompt...
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017
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thank you for your thoughtful review. I'm so excited about my win!
~patty~
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You are so welcome, Patty, and congratulations...Eve
Comment from His Grayness
Clearly, this is a six star work with powerful energy delivered in photo and simple writing delivery as called for by the Tanka poetry structure. I cannot offer anything to improve this and thank the author for a powerful work here! HIS GRAYNESS.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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Clearly, this is a six star work with powerful energy delivered in photo and simple writing delivery as called for by the Tanka poetry structure. I cannot offer anything to improve this and thank the author for a powerful work here! HIS GRAYNESS.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017
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thank you so much for your thoughtful and encouraging review
