The River
A Shakespearean Sonnet for the contest32 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
I tried to come up with some constructive criticism but I think you have done a superb job on this Sonnet, Tony. You pulled me in with your opening line.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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I tried to come up with some constructive criticism but I think you have done a superb job on this Sonnet, Tony. You pulled me in with your opening line.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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I was flattered by your comments about The River, DonandVicki. Thanks for reviewing. Best wishes, Tony
Comment from lyenochka
This is a beautiful sonnet, Tony! The fawn drinking in the early morning reminds me of a childhood song. I guess the misty dawn made the river look like Styx? The bird and plop of the water rat and then the lively play of youth during the day take us through time and the couplet at the end echoes the river, a metaphor of life.
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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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This is a beautiful sonnet, Tony! The fawn drinking in the early morning reminds me of a childhood song. I guess the misty dawn made the river look like Styx? The bird and plop of the water rat and then the lively play of youth during the day take us through time and the couplet at the end echoes the river, a metaphor of life.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2017
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I enjoyed reading your comments about The River, Lyenochka. Thanks for reviewing. Best wishes, Tony
