Comment from oliver818

Excellent

I like this short little poem. You summed up a lot in a very small space. Dogs are indeed amazing and great friends. Thanks for sharing and have a great day

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017

thank you for your thoughtful review. My puppies are a constant source of inspiration.
~patty~

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Cute puppy. Nice poem to show your gratitude for the unconditional love that pet gives you. Hopefully, it will inspire other people to get pets. I heard on the news last week, Colorado didn't have enough pets. So they flew in street dogs (golden retreivers) from Turkey. I wish immigration were so simple.

Good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017

thank you for your thoughtful review. My puppies are a constant source of inspiration.
~patty~

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent, short ode to your puppies
You've described the dog perfectly
in the lanturne form
I've had many dogs over the years,
but now I have allergies
Great picture
Nicely done

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2017

thank you for your thoughtful review. My puppies are a constant source of inspiration.
~patty~

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

I loved your puppy poem. You know, a dog can snap you out of any kind of bad mood that you're in faster than anything else I can think of. Thanks for sharing this piece.
Bill~

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

Hi Bill; I appreciate you stopping by to read and review. My dogs are a constant inspiration for my writing, and they help in everything I do.
~patty~

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

Hi Patty, love your doggie lanterne!

Unconditional love is their game
'twould be nice if people were the same
Good luck, Trisha

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

Thank you, Trisha, for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and glowing review,
~patty~

reply by Bucketlist on 27-Mar-2017

You are always welcome

Comment from nuthead

Excellent

There are no more loyal friends than dogs, for sure. Beloved friends. Yes. Safety in their love and loyalty, indeed.

Your lanturne poem reflects the light these lovely creatures fill our world with. I enjoy these lanturne poems, whose shape reflects that of a lantern, when the words/sentiment symbolizes light as well. Nice!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. My puppies are an inspiration for a great deal of my writing. They're normally cuddled to my side as I piece together my prose and poetry.
~patty~

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This has to be one of the shortest odes ever written. Considering that in their original form them were excessively long diatribes I'd say this was a distinct improvement.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you consider my poem an improvement over the traditional ode. Your continuing support of my work is greatly appreciated,
~patty~

Comment from dmt1967

Exceptional

Dogs will always love their owners, no matter what. They are loyal, kind, and know just when to ask for a cuddle or to lick one. I like the sentiment of this poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. The six star rating is lovely. My dogs make my life easier each and every day. Your kind words and encouragement are appreciated.
~patty~

Comment from melyuki

Excellent

oh, such a sweet and reflective little verse Patty. Love the picture to accompany your words. Each line enhances that joy we receive from our doggies.. Loyal, loving friends who steel our hearts... thanks for sharing.. beautiful thoughts .. happy smiles for you and your puppies. cheers mel xx

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. Writing about my dogs is a great source of joy, as are they. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from Bobby Jo

Excellent

I like your poem and I love the picture of your dog. Yes,dogs have a place in my heart that will never die. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. Your kind words are appreciated,
~patty~