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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "haiku (morning birds gather)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
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Comment from Dean Kuch
Another very common name for the lovely, fragrant
Magnolia tree is 'Heaven Scent'.
Hence, the clever satori referring to a hallelujah choir.
Very clever, Karyn, a well done haiku.
~Dean
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Another very common name for the lovely, fragrant
Magnolia tree is 'Heaven Scent'.
Hence, the clever satori referring to a hallelujah choir.
Very clever, Karyn, a well done haiku.
~Dean
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review and taking the time to read and share your comments for my tree haiku, Dean. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. It's one of my favorite trees, especially in spring.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
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Mine too, and you're welcome. :)
Comment from Teri7
Karyn, This is a beautifully written haiku about the birds and their chorus. I hear them in the morning here too and they sound beautiful. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this! Blessings Teri
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Karyn, This is a beautifully written haiku about the birds and their chorus. I hear them in the morning here too and they sound beautiful. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this! Blessings Teri
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review and taking the time to read and share your comments for my tree haiku, Teri. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from patcelaw
To be where you can hear the birds singing in the magnolia trees, has to be a great blessing from God. The sounds and the fragrant flowers makes for a perfect morning in anyone's book. Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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To be where you can hear the birds singing in the magnolia trees, has to be a great blessing from God. The sounds and the fragrant flowers makes for a perfect morning in anyone's book. Patricia
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review and taking the time to read and share your comments for my tree haiku, Patricia. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Sis Cat
Wow, this is a great one. Your haiku is both vivid and I can hear the morning birds in the fragrant flowering magnolia. Your satori is inspired.
Thank you for sharing your contribution.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Wow, this is a great one. Your haiku is both vivid and I can hear the morning birds in the fragrant flowering magnolia. Your satori is inspired.
Thank you for sharing your contribution.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review and taking the time to read and share your comments for my tree haiku, Sis Cat. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from kahpot
An excellent read I can picture the choir of birds pleasantly waking you up and standing you in a great mood to greet the day ahead thank you for sharing****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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An excellent read I can picture the choir of birds pleasantly waking you up and standing you in a great mood to greet the day ahead thank you for sharing****kahpot
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review and taking the time to read and share your comments for my tree haiku, kahpot. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Poetic Friend
Aaah, i love this haiku. The poem gives the reader a happy feeling to hear those birds gather to sing in the choir. The imagery and the personification shine in this poetic gem.
Great usage of word economy. You made every word and syllable count.
This was such a pleasure to read.
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Aaah, i love this haiku. The poem gives the reader a happy feeling to hear those birds gather to sing in the choir. The imagery and the personification shine in this poetic gem.
Great usage of word economy. You made every word and syllable count.
This was such a pleasure to read.
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review and taking the time to read and share your comments for my tree haiku, Poetic Friend. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment from Hitcher
They are stunningly beautiful trees when in full bloom, my wife's father had one on his property. I like that you don't attach artwork indy and leave it to your creative words to paint the desired picture in the minds eye of the reader...Very Nice!!
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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They are stunningly beautiful trees when in full bloom, my wife's father had one on his property. I like that you don't attach artwork indy and leave it to your creative words to paint the desired picture in the minds eye of the reader...Very Nice!!
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your review and taking the time to read and share your comments for my tree haiku, Hitch. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for your comment about not using artwork!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
