Chasing of the Wind.
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Void between the Two Worlds."Conflict between the Human Needs and the Divinity
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Comment from DonandVicki
I tried to come up with some constructive criticism but I think you have done a superb job on this story. You pulled me in with your opening line.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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I tried to come up with some constructive criticism but I think you have done a superb job on this story. You pulled me in with your opening line.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2017
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Thank you for the comment and rating. The centerpiece of this story is Love for the humanity regardless of who an individual is. The basis, I believe of the teaching of Jesus which got lost in the world today. I hope you will visit my portfolio and read the novel. There are errors on the pages but most of them are caused by Fanstory's poor quality word processor software. After cut and paste from the MS Word, it convert's some punctuation marks or foreign language phrases into unwanted Alphabets and Symbols.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
The novel, Chasing of the wind covers one aspect of human sexuality that nothing has explained so far. Can a person fall in love with another of same gender and not have homosexual relationship because of religious restrictions? Is it a sin to ardently love an object of worship? This chapter gives the glimpse of Father Francis' dilemma. It is not meant to promote any creed nor to criticise any faith. Just a presentation of an idiosyncrasy(check you spelling) of a man.
What a fascinating idea, just as your writing was ultra fascinating. I enjoyed reading it so much and it really made me think kindest regards, meia :)
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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The novel, Chasing of the wind covers one aspect of human sexuality that nothing has explained so far. Can a person fall in love with another of same gender and not have homosexual relationship because of religious restrictions? Is it a sin to ardently love an object of worship? This chapter gives the glimpse of Father Francis' dilemma. It is not meant to promote any creed nor to criticise any faith. Just a presentation of an idiosyncrasy(check you spelling) of a man.
What a fascinating idea, just as your writing was ultra fascinating. I enjoyed reading it so much and it really made me think kindest regards, meia :)
Comment Written 24-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2017
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Thanks Meia. I often write about subjects which trouble my mind and questions arise about our life on this planet. I have been researching in the spiritual aspect of religious thoughts accumulated over a long time and I find there is love between the central figure, like Jesus , Buddha and others and the humanity and yet the organized religions do not acknowledge it. I don't know how I missed that spelling error. My warm regards and best wishes. Hope you will read the novel. It is endin in the next chapter.
