Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This is an example of absolute supernatural wish, a sort of dreamful desperate wish to feel some supernatural cause of achievement for fun and humour; poet says confidently.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your comments and warm encouragement,
~patty~

Comment from doggymad

Excellent

this was beautiful peaceful poem. Filled of the love of Christ.

We are all call but in different ways. You were indeed blessed to have found yours. He guides us well

hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I do my best to always let Him know how much I appreciate His sacrifice for me.
~patty~

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

'He called me to be a bride,
He gave me the role of mother and wife,
I live because He died.'
What a wonderful poem, this is beautifully written. It is an exceptionally good cherita, well done and kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Hi Meia; Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I do my best to always let Him know how much I appreciate His sacrifice for me. Your words of praise for my try at the cherita mean a lot.
~patty~

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

AMEN, a beautiful write, you gave a totally different testament of the LORD JESUS sacrifice for us, I can see this gem giving the Fathers joyous smile in the praise and thank giving you so well wrote of.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I do my best to always let Him know how much I appreciate His sacrifice for me.
~patty~

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem, presented with a beautiful image. Thank you for introducing me to a new style of poetry too.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I wish you lots of luck with the cherita form. It was a challenge, but well worth the time,
~patty~

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Patty, I loved this, not an expert with Cherita,s but this seems to fit with your description.
Wonderful Spiritual message, a beautiful last line that completes The poem so well.
Have a lovely evening

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement. This poetic form was a harder task than I first imagined,
~patty~

Comment from nuthead

Excellent

This is the second Cherita I've read in the last two days. I really like its form. Might have to give it a try. Add it to my growing list of "to do".

Your Cherita is beautiful, that you have found comfort in Him and His presence in every facet of your world. Lovely.

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 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017

Thank you for stopping by to read and review. This was a difficult form to write for me. I struggled with the lines and rhyming pattern. I hope you have better luck with yours,
~patty~