Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A lovely Cherita Patty with a beautiful message in excellent Cherita form and rhyme.
Beautiful artwork to enhance your work. Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I appreciate your time and encouragement.
~patty~

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem although I am not familiar with the rhyming scheme. I am learning something new every day.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

A form I have never heard of but following the notes, it looks like it was done perfectly and what a perfect subject to write on. I live because He died=perfect

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

Comment from Lena Borghi

Excellent

This is only the second Cherita I read. I like the form, which seems simple but definitely has its challenges. As far as I can see, you have followed all the requirements. The three elements are semantically linked and you have additionally rhymed the entire poem with two rhymes A/BB/ABA.

I love the message. I didn't give it a six because you started both the first and second lines with the word "with." You could change the first line to avoid this. i.e. "Every step I take, He is right by my side." I liked the repetition of "He" in every line of the tercet.

Well done! I enjoyed this read.

Best.
Lena

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

Comment from Susanjohn

Excellent

A very lovely and beautifully expressed faith based poem. Nicely presented..nice and easy flowing write...I truly enjoyed reading. :-))) have a lovely day :-)

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

I've read some of your other writing. You are always uplifting. We need all the uplifting writers we can get. The world is a dangerous place now.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement. I try to be as uplifting as possible,
~patty~

Comment from artemis53

Excellent

Very well done. I, myself don't know if I could ever attempt it sice I don't seem to be able to stay within boundaries. It's always great to see someone try something new!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, the message is clear and rendered with loving respect. While I don't understand this style of poem, I can readily appreciate its spiritual message and find it arresting - thank you for the gentle prayer it expresses so simply...

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

reply by evesayshi on 23-Mar-2017

You are very welcome, Patty - I apologize for my ignorance regarding this poetic form...Eve

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A great tribute to your faith and a celebration of your life and the strength your faith has given you . . . . . Best wishes Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
~patty~

Comment from Nan Beeson

Excellent

Good morning....

I found your Cherita poem to be true in the Biblical Sense of the World.....

God is our Bridegroom, and we are His children that He created as Souls -- He placed each of us in the womb of the parents He had chosen for us

I wanted to read about you before I answered and thanked you for your wonderful review about Energy Sappers.

I found it very pleasing to find that to me in ways we awr of like mind, and am certain I will enjoy your further posts and why I am becoming a fan.

Thank you for sharing,.... It was lovely to read, especially today on my 91st birthday, LOL... I wasn't going to tgell anone, but thought it apprropriate at this particlar time since we seem to share so many of our true selves..

Bless You.....Nan:))

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement. Happy, happy birthday to you!
~patty~

reply by Nan Beeson on 23-Mar-2017

Thank you Patty. That is so kind and sweet of you.....Nan:))