I 'll write again ...
I know I will23 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Great news! Welcome back...so glad you'll be treating us to you fabulous
writes! Missed you indeed...God Bless... looking forward to your poetic
star shining here again!
Best wishes always, Ronni
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Great news! Welcome back...so glad you'll be treating us to you fabulous
writes! Missed you indeed...God Bless... looking forward to your poetic
star shining here again!
Best wishes always, Ronni
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Ronni, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends on FS. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment from Joan E.
I am delighted you shared your latest poem and added a new profile picture with one of your great grandchilden. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and bit of self-deprecation at the end. More smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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I am delighted you shared your latest poem and added a new profile picture with one of your great grandchilden. I enjoyed your rhymed quatrains and bit of self-deprecation at the end. More smiles- Joan
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Joan, thank you so much for your kind review and comments, and yes, I like the profile picture too - thanks. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Well your pen certainly worked it's magic here in this short but wonderfully written poem with great flow and rhymes, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Well your pen certainly worked it's magic here in this short but wonderfully written poem with great flow and rhymes, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Dolly, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment from WalkerMan
Yes, I hope you do, as I like it and think others do too. We all have busy lives that interfere, but we can write during the lulls in that.
One suggestion for this post: In the last stanza, line 2, a comma would be appropriate between "essay" and "be" (and the pause it produces helps there too).
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Yes, I hope you do, as I like it and think others do too. We all have busy lives that interfere, but we can write during the lulls in that.
One suggestion for this post: In the last stanza, line 2, a comma would be appropriate between "essay" and "be" (and the pause it produces helps there too).
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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WalkerMan, thank you so much for your kind review and comments and suggestions. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Nice to see something from you again, Marijke.
I think that every writer can relate so well to this poem. We all seem to go through periods of time wherein we want to write, but nothing will come to us. Our muse just isn't there. It's always a joy and a relief when our muse returns.
I especially like your ending "but I'm sure I'll write again ... for better or for worse". LOL ... yes, we don't care. We're just happy when we can write again. :-)
Connie
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Nice to see something from you again, Marijke.
I think that every writer can relate so well to this poem. We all seem to go through periods of time wherein we want to write, but nothing will come to us. Our muse just isn't there. It's always a joy and a relief when our muse returns.
I especially like your ending "but I'm sure I'll write again ... for better or for worse". LOL ... yes, we don't care. We're just happy when we can write again. :-)
Connie
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Connie, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends on FS. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi Marijke, I am glad you put pen to paper and this was a great poem. Sometimes life gets in the way of a passion like writing and one can have a lull,. Meter lovely to read, it is good to see you back Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Hi Marijke, I am glad you put pen to paper and this was a great poem. Sometimes life gets in the way of a passion like writing and one can have a lull,. Meter lovely to read, it is good to see you back Cheers Christine
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Chrissy thank you so much for your kind review and comments. I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends, and make some new friends on FS. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment from Sasha
It is great to have you back and I know your muse will return soon. They always take an unplanned break and then show up when you least expect them. Lovely work with this poem... something I have no talent for.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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It is great to have you back and I know your muse will return soon. They always take an unplanned break and then show up when you least expect them. Lovely work with this poem... something I have no talent for.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Sasha, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends on FS. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment from BeasPeas
I loved your poem. I guess we all need a break now and then and you have described the ambivalence so well here. Good rhyming and glow. Content suits us all. Nicely illustrated. Welcome back. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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I loved your poem. I guess we all need a break now and then and you have described the ambivalence so well here. Good rhyming and glow. Content suits us all. Nicely illustrated. Welcome back. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Marilyn, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, I look forward to catching up with all my 'old' friends on FS. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
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I'll be notified in my mailbox, Marijke. :)
Comment from ronnie k
For sure you will because with this little gem your muse will surly be feeling her oats and will not be stilled, thank you for coming home I will surly read you again, Ronnie k.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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For sure you will because with this little gem your muse will surly be feeling her oats and will not be stilled, thank you for coming home I will surly read you again, Ronnie k.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Ronnie, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
Comment from Sis Cat
I am glad your Muse came to help you write this verse. This is an appealing poem about overcoming writer's block. Your poem is well-rhymed and is spoken in an urgent voice. Poem has a Waiting for Godot aspect as the poet waits for inspiration instead of acts in the hear and now to:
"write again - whatever form
Be it essay be it verse."
I see inspiration all around me and am not waiting for an outside Muse to inspire me.
I am glad you returned to FanStory. Now keep writing. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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I am glad your Muse came to help you write this verse. This is an appealing poem about overcoming writer's block. Your poem is well-rhymed and is spoken in an urgent voice. Poem has a Waiting for Godot aspect as the poet waits for inspiration instead of acts in the hear and now to:
"write again - whatever form
Be it essay be it verse."
I see inspiration all around me and am not waiting for an outside Muse to inspire me.
I am glad you returned to FanStory. Now keep writing. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
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Sis Cat, thank you so much for your kind review and comments. Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx
