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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Haiku(tree trunks gnarled by time)"
A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets

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Comment from Lu Saluna
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I like the image you have created with your first two lines. Very vivid and creative.
Your satori - "natural sculpture" sums up well, the look of an aged tree trunk.
Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2017

Comment from marybell1
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I enjoyed reading you haiku "Trees". It had all the lines and syllables correct. 5-7-5 to me is the only true haiku. I liked your choice of photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
    Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from tfawcus
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I know that pictures are redundant in Haiku, but this one parallels your words to perfection. The idea of great age or agelessness gives your poem a feeling of eternal being or immortality.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
    Thanks for reading & critique zanya