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Family Poems and Stories 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Hailey's Birth"
...musings on us

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Comment from bookishfabler
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What a wonderful thing to witness, Almost like the birth of your own children. I do not have kids, but I want grand children. I know that is not physically possible, I just want to skip the hard part, motherhood and go to the good part, coddling and spoiling and giving back.

hugs Heidi

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~
Comment from Dean Kuch
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I envy you this experience, Patty as it is one I have yet to experience myself.
Hailey is a beautiful little gal, and it is no wonder that you're very proud of her.
Other than the love and bond we share with our own mothers, I believe the love of a Grandmother is the most wondrous kinds of love there is.
Congratulations to you and your family.
They done good...~Dean ;)

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~
reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Mar-2017
    No doubt, as well it should be.
    You're more than welcome, patty.
    ~Dean
Comment from nuthead
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Aww what a gift! My middle daughter and husband had a baby 6 weeks ago, and I too was in the delivery room. Such an honour ...

Love the way you describe your new granddaughter's tiny rosebud mouth yawning. Soooo precious.

Congratulations, Grammy!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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She's a real beauty. You must be so thrilled to have a new granddaughter. I'm still waiting for my first one. Katy got married last year, and I hint and hint. She puts up with it. :)

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~
Comment from Heidi M
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What a memory to cherish! Such a special time; there's nothing else like it.
One minor suggestion:
eclipsed (by) the pride

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~
Comment from lyenochka
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It is a remarkable thing, isn't it? How grandparents can bond with their grandchildren. How wonderful you got to be there. I, too, was surprised at how marvelous our love for our grandchildren. Love without all the fear and anxiety of being first time parents.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Hello my friend the gift go grandchildren is amazing and it starts a brand new chapter in your life your feelings comes through so well in this write well done good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~
Comment from RGstar
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Nicely done. I have been present once and it is the most beautiful thing I can remember in that context, though I never thought could be, before the experience.
Nicely done.
Best wishes, and good luck in the competition.
RGstar

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Patty, this is a lovely little piece of the arrival of your precious granddaughter. Bless you. I have two of them. I know how you feel. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~
Comment from doggymad
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Thank you for sharing two of the most precious moments in your life Patty. I have not been privileged to have this experience but babies are such a miracle they really touch the heart.

hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~