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Family Poems and Stories 2010-2017

Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Hailey's Birth"
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Comment from l.raven
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HI Patty, I was bought to tears when I read your story...reminded me when my grandkids were born....it is a true miracle never to be forgotten...I love your story told...and a picture so priceless....very well written my friend....Love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I am so glad you enjoyed this little story. It is truly one of my best memories,
    ~patty~
reply by l.raven on 23-Mar-2017
    you are so very welcome...xxoo love
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Ah, Patty, you always tells the most precious stories. The type od stories that everyone could relate and relate. I love the way you ending the story -- "Say hello to Grammy, Hailey".

Your granddaughter is just adorable. How old is she in this picture? She has a head full of beautiful hair. I love her smile.

Good luck in the contest my friend. This story is worth remembering. ")

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
    Thank you for your wonderful comments and warm words. In the picture I included, Hailey was just a few hours old. She is now two and a half, and still at the very center of my heart,
    ~patty~
reply by Poetic Friend on 21-Mar-2017
    I see why she is the center of your universe. She is beautiful!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your story brought back to me the wonderful memories when my two girls were born. There is nothing like the joy for giving birth to new life, your story is a wonderful memory you will always keep, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for your kind review. Hailey's birth was a memory that I have the honor of sharing with my daughter. I appreciate your comments,
    ~patty~
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Www, what a beautiful little girl! She must have filled your heart with love. There is nothing so amazing as watching a baby take its first breath. Congratulations on her birth, and you adorable story to honor her. Good luck in the contest,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. This was indeed one of the best memories of my life,
    ~patty~
Comment from Mabaker
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What a wonderful story. It was a pleasure to hear from grandma, it's usually everyone else rarely grandma. That was a lovely touch I hope you enjoy Hailey forever. Sincerely Mabaker

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I was so lucky to be in the delivery room - I can't help but talk about it. Hailey is a blessing I will always cherish. This was for the 'I remember' contest, so she is going to be three, and the memory is still clear,
    ~patty~
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
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My joy at the sight of her was only eclipsed by the pride I felt for my daughter. She went through childbirth with no pain killers. Only her will to bring forth the life inside sustained her through the ordeal. Her pain was replaced with a special joy when she looked upon her baby's face.' This one had me in tears again! A perfectly beautiful and amazing journey you have taken us on with your word, I really was delighted to read this and share in a small way in your joy. She is beautiful, well done love Meia xx

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much, Meia. I sent a copy to my daughter, and she cried, too. Hailey will be 3 in August, and I am so in love with her and her little brother. I feel so blessed to have them in my life. I'm glad you enjoyed this special memory,
    ~patty~
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I know what you mean, I was the same when my granddaughter was born, and the love I feel for her is overwhelmingly wonderful. Mine is 16 years old now, and I still have that amazing bond with her. I am sure you are going to have a journey that will give both of you a lot of pleasure. Congrats on becoming a grandmother! :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments and encouragement.
    ~patty~

Comment from dmt1967
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This is a great story and memory. I can remember my daughter being that small. I like the picture as well, such a cute baby. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing this poem.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This memory is absolutely one of my best!
    ~patty~
Comment from Louise Michelle
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I know exactly how you feel because I have a granddaughter.

The love in your family is so obvious and it warms the heart.

Hailey is absolutely gorgeous! Can't say that about all newborns. Enjoy, enjoy.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This memory is absolutely one of my best!
    ~patty~
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

this is a very nice piece which should do pretty well in the competition I would have thought. good writing and good subject matter.

My wife also did the no meds birth, she was relatively quick too.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 20-Mar-2017
    Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. This was probably one of the most memorable moments of my life,
    ~patty~