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Comment from Lu Saluna
This is a very pretty haiku suite about a very beautiful tree. I love the colours and how you describe the tree with each haiku
I will be honest, the first haiku doesn't grab me for some reason but the second one I really like, it really speaks to me as you are referring to Mother Nature's beautiful colours.
Your third haiku is my favourite. I love the play on words and the "nature's masterpiece" is a perfect satori for the gorgeous tree.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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This is a very pretty haiku suite about a very beautiful tree. I love the colours and how you describe the tree with each haiku
I will be honest, the first haiku doesn't grab me for some reason but the second one I really like, it really speaks to me as you are referring to Mother Nature's beautiful colours.
Your third haiku is my favourite. I love the play on words and the "nature's masterpiece" is a perfect satori for the gorgeous tree.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I wrote this suite in the middle of the night because I could not sleep and I stayed up until 4:30 am. I changed the haiga 50 times and on my back and forths I double posted the suite. It's fixed now. I disabled one and corrected the other one.
Thank you very much, my friend. Your generosity is always a precious gift to me and your feedback is extremely helpful. Thank you for the bottom of my heart. Thank you for the six stars!!!!
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
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I see that, I just opened up the second post.
I wrote my comments on the one you disabled, the one you didn't promote. Will this not show up as part of your rating on the poem?
Comment from Hitcher
I think I would have to pick your third offering as my favorite friend
Rainbow eucalyptus
a peels to the senses
nature's masterpiece
With or without the accompanying artwork this one screams beauty : )
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I think I would have to pick your third offering as my favorite friend
Rainbow eucalyptus
a peels to the senses
nature's masterpiece
With or without the accompanying artwork this one screams beauty : )
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. Your generosity is always a precious gift to me and your feedback is extremely helpful. Thank you for the bottom of my heart.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Those were great Haiga Haiku, Beautifully
described eucalyptus trees. I had no idea
They have rainbow colored ones. Quite fascinating.
~Kerry~
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Those were great Haiga Haiku, Beautifully
described eucalyptus trees. I had no idea
They have rainbow colored ones. Quite fascinating.
~Kerry~
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I know! Right? They are amazing... thank you honey :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ric Myworld
What a fitting name for the Rainbow Eucalyptus tree, a real beauty, bursting with it's own palate of colors. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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What a fitting name for the Rainbow Eucalyptus tree, a real beauty, bursting with it's own palate of colors. Thanks for sharing another fine poem. :-)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, you are very kind and I appreciate that you took your precious time to read and review my haiku. It's extremely helpful.
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
<>o<>Haiga Class starts on May 1st<>o<>
Comment from Grasshopper2
Lady Blue,
Bee-ut-ee-ful tree and your suite, too. Colorful, fun and the tree has an incredible strong medicinal smell. Interesting and fun to see and read.
Michael
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Lady Blue,
Bee-ut-ee-ful tree and your suite, too. Colorful, fun and the tree has an incredible strong medicinal smell. Interesting and fun to see and read.
Michael
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, you are very kind and I appreciate that you took your precious time to read and review my haiku. It's extremely helpful.
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
<>o<>Haiga Class starts on May 1st<>o<>
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I have seen them and you are so right, they are absolutely a true masterpiece. The first haiku lead nicely into the second, making them complete.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I have seen them and you are so right, they are absolutely a true masterpiece. The first haiku lead nicely into the second, making them complete.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend,
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
<>o<>Haiga Class starts on May 1st<>o<>
Comment from Sasha
This is awesome. I love both the illustrations and the lovely haikus that go with each. I have never seen the rainbow eucalyptus before, it is stunning as are your poems.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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This is awesome. I love both the illustrations and the lovely haikus that go with each. I have never seen the rainbow eucalyptus before, it is stunning as are your poems.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend, you are very kind and I appreciate that you took your precious time to read and review my haiku. It's extremely helpful.
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
<>o<>Haiga Class starts on May 1st<>o<>
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a beautiful haiga suite that resonated with me, Gypsy, not only for your fine imagery and word play, but also because I live in California populated by eucalyptus trees brought from Australia one hundred and fifty years. Some people think these trees are pests because they crowd out native trees. I wish California at least got the rainbow eucalyptus you described. Your text and words on the rainbow bark of the trees resemble Clyfford Still abstract expressionist paintings.
Thank you for sharing your haiga suite.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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This is a beautiful haiga suite that resonated with me, Gypsy, not only for your fine imagery and word play, but also because I live in California populated by eucalyptus trees brought from Australia one hundred and fifty years. Some people think these trees are pests because they crowd out native trees. I wish California at least got the rainbow eucalyptus you described. Your text and words on the rainbow bark of the trees resemble Clyfford Still abstract expressionist paintings.
Thank you for sharing your haiga suite.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much, Andre. Your reviews are so insightful and your feedback is extremely helpful. Thank you for the bottom of my heart.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
Comment from Mark Schardine
The eucalyptus with its svelte form and bright colors makes us stop and take a look. Would the late Andy Warhol find inspiration here?
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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The eucalyptus with its svelte form and bright colors makes us stop and take a look. Would the late Andy Warhol find inspiration here?
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Yes. I could totally see Andy Warhol paint trees like these if he was alive. Thank you very much, my friend. Your generosity is always a precious gift to me and your feedback is extremely helpful. Thank you for the bottom of my heart.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
Comment from DR DIP
Gypsy it's funny but I always thought that the eucalyptus tree was native to Australia. And here's your authors notes saying this species is found in the northern hemisphere. I am continually learning from you.
You certainly love your haiku.
dip
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Gypsy it's funny but I always thought that the eucalyptus tree was native to Australia. And here's your authors notes saying this species is found in the northern hemisphere. I am continually learning from you.
You certainly love your haiku.
dip
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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You learn from me? That is the nicest thing anyone has said to me today. Thank you very much, my friend. Your generosity is always a precious gift to me and your feedback is extremely helpful. Thank you for the bottom of my heart.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
