Will Someone Say Amen?
A prayer for help61 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
AMEN, dear jaybird! i love your philosophical sentiment and the insightful commentary.
thank you for sharing!
unfortunately no sixes left..
blessings and a Christmas cheer hug!
rebekka xxx
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AMEN, dear jaybird! i love your philosophical sentiment and the insightful commentary.
thank you for sharing!
unfortunately no sixes left..
blessings and a Christmas cheer hug!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. The poem sounded like a soft, personal prayer. Good job and very well done.
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. The poem sounded like a soft, personal prayer. Good job and very well done.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
Comment from LeannaP
This was truly remarkable to read. It is true. It is very important to remember that God has a plan regardless if we understand it or not. And it is important to remember that he DOES reveal his ways to us in ways for us to understand.
I hope this resonates.
Nicely written
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This was truly remarkable to read. It is true. It is very important to remember that God has a plan regardless if we understand it or not. And it is important to remember that he DOES reveal his ways to us in ways for us to understand.
I hope this resonates.
Nicely written
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
Comment from AvL
J-bird's complaint is addressed ostensibly, and primarily, to God, but, by extension, to us readers, also. His words are simply eloquent, and eloquently simple ... like the prayers of real people. Well-done.
AvL
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J-bird's complaint is addressed ostensibly, and primarily, to God, but, by extension, to us readers, also. His words are simply eloquent, and eloquently simple ... like the prayers of real people. Well-done.
AvL
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Jay: stars for your poem. We must share our faith with others.
We must stop harming people and walk in love. I'll say AMEN!
Too many fight in congress and we must unite. Love and blessings.
flylikeaneagle Stars for you...
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Jay: stars for your poem. We must share our faith with others.
We must stop harming people and walk in love. I'll say AMEN!
Too many fight in congress and we must unite. Love and blessings.
flylikeaneagle Stars for you...
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a nice feel to it and a clear message. Thanks for sharing this poem and have yourself a really great day
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Nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and has a nice feel to it and a clear message. Thanks for sharing this poem and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
Comment from sunnilicious
I rather take a trip live in the moment and vacation at Universal Studios. God had a plan. Adam ate the apple. We were banished to make life from our own minds. Too many things accomplished by mankind with modernization and technologies. Can we find a way back to God?
Enjoyable poem to read. It made me think. God bless us all.
Merry Christmas :)
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I rather take a trip live in the moment and vacation at Universal Studios. God had a plan. Adam ate the apple. We were banished to make life from our own minds. Too many things accomplished by mankind with modernization and technologies. Can we find a way back to God?
Enjoyable poem to read. It made me think. God bless us all.
Merry Christmas :)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
Comment from Raul1
I like how this poem rhymes in the lines. You expressed with emotions. I have enjoyed reading this poem. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thanks for sharing!
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I like how this poem rhymes in the lines. You expressed with emotions. I have enjoyed reading this poem. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Well, Amen! You know how to put a prayer together! I've always found it sad that there are so many denomination out there. Each one believing it knows something a little different than the next church! But there is really only one truth. xoxo
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Well, Amen! You know how to put a prayer together! I've always found it sad that there are so many denomination out there. Each one believing it knows something a little different than the next church! But there is really only one truth. xoxo
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
Comment from zanya
A philosophical vein running through these inspiring stanzas that reflect on Mankind's place in the world and how he negotiates the earthly journey - just what poetry does best - enables us to reflect on the 'big' issues
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A philosophical vein running through these inspiring stanzas that reflect on Mankind's place in the world and how he negotiates the earthly journey - just what poetry does best - enables us to reflect on the 'big' issues
Comment Written 19-Dec-2019
